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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the proposal was Not promoted. Stale for 7 days. -- Rschen7754 ( T C) 06:32, 26 November 2008 (UTC) reply

Interstate 80 Business (West Wendover, NV – Wendover, UT) (0 net support votes)

Interstate 80 Business (West Wendover, NV – Wendover, UT) ( | talk | history | links | watch | logs) review

Suggestion: Promote to A-Class
Nominator's comments: Looking for an A-class Interstate BL and another Utah (and Nevada) A-Class.
Nominated by: Admrboltz ( talk) 03:13, 10 October 2008 (UTC) reply
  • Perhaps just lop off the major junction of Alt US-93 in the infobox; it's already listed in the terminus, so perhaps for the sake of redundancy you should remove it. Also, maybe change abbreviating Alt US-93 from "US-93 Alt." to "US-93A". What do you think of this? —Preceding unsigned comment added by CountyLemonade ( talk • contribs) 03:55, 10 October 2008
    • Why should we change the abbreviation? The correct abbreviation is US 93 Alt accd to NDOT, but I have a dash in there right now to keep it consistent with the rest of the article. I left 93 Alt in the major junctions as, well it is a junction, with BL-80, just cause it continues along with I-80 doesn't mean its not a junction. -- Admrboltz ( talk) 04:00, 10 October 2008 (UTC) reply
      • Eh, I guess just because I prefer it better. US-93A looks better to me than US-93 Alt., but we are Wikipedia so if NDOT uses this abbreviation then we should too :) C L — 04:08, 10 October 2008 (UTC) reply
  • Comments

These are real quick comments, I'll give a more thorough review as soon as I can.

OK, here's the more thorough review I promised.

  • Part of the Nevada section is cosigned as U.S. Route 93 Alternate (US-93 Alt), and was formerly Nevada State Route 224 while the entirety of the route in Utah is cosigned as Utah State Route 58 (SR-58). This sentence either needs additional punctuation or be broken into two.
  • The time zone boundary at the state line should be mentioned in prose.
  • The bolded terms at the state line entry of the major intersections table should be de-linked. If somebody hasn't figured out what Nevada and Utah are by this point in the article, there's trouble in paradise, and again the time zone should be mentioned in prose. =-)
  • It's a good article if that's the most dirt I can pick out, congrats =-) Dave ( talk) 01:22, 11 October 2008 (UTC) reply

Support - Issues resolved to my satafaction. for the record I would still prefer SR-58 an an alternate shield, not a junction, but it's not that big of deal. Dave ( talk) 04:19, 16 October 2008 (UTC) reply

  • Oppose - a few issues, most minor, but a few major...
    • Lead - what departments of transportation?
    • You use cosigned 3 times in 2 sentences.
    • Blvd = Boulevard
    • RD - ex- should probably not be used.
    • How are you sourcing the locations of the businesses?
    • However comma to access...
    • You suddenly switch to mentioning SR 58 in the second half of the RD. That is a bit confusing.
    • History is hard to follow - maybe I'm just tired but it is hard to connect how SR 58 relates with the rest of it. Of course, one could look at the lead again, but that's a pain.
    • You mention SR 224 in the lead, and it is never mentioned in the history.
    • Please consider combining the Google Maps cites.
    • Not that I necessarily agree with this, but an advisory that a FAC reviewer could criticize sourcing using photographs as OR. Just a warning. -- Rschen7754 ( T C) 09:25, 17 November 2008 (UTC) reply
The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the proposal was Not promoted. Stale for 7 days. -- Rschen7754 ( T C) 06:32, 26 November 2008 (UTC) reply

Interstate 80 Business (West Wendover, NV – Wendover, UT) (0 net support votes)

Interstate 80 Business (West Wendover, NV – Wendover, UT) ( | talk | history | links | watch | logs) review

Suggestion: Promote to A-Class
Nominator's comments: Looking for an A-class Interstate BL and another Utah (and Nevada) A-Class.
Nominated by: Admrboltz ( talk) 03:13, 10 October 2008 (UTC) reply
  • Perhaps just lop off the major junction of Alt US-93 in the infobox; it's already listed in the terminus, so perhaps for the sake of redundancy you should remove it. Also, maybe change abbreviating Alt US-93 from "US-93 Alt." to "US-93A". What do you think of this? —Preceding unsigned comment added by CountyLemonade ( talk • contribs) 03:55, 10 October 2008
    • Why should we change the abbreviation? The correct abbreviation is US 93 Alt accd to NDOT, but I have a dash in there right now to keep it consistent with the rest of the article. I left 93 Alt in the major junctions as, well it is a junction, with BL-80, just cause it continues along with I-80 doesn't mean its not a junction. -- Admrboltz ( talk) 04:00, 10 October 2008 (UTC) reply
      • Eh, I guess just because I prefer it better. US-93A looks better to me than US-93 Alt., but we are Wikipedia so if NDOT uses this abbreviation then we should too :) C L — 04:08, 10 October 2008 (UTC) reply
  • Comments

These are real quick comments, I'll give a more thorough review as soon as I can.

OK, here's the more thorough review I promised.

  • Part of the Nevada section is cosigned as U.S. Route 93 Alternate (US-93 Alt), and was formerly Nevada State Route 224 while the entirety of the route in Utah is cosigned as Utah State Route 58 (SR-58). This sentence either needs additional punctuation or be broken into two.
  • The time zone boundary at the state line should be mentioned in prose.
  • The bolded terms at the state line entry of the major intersections table should be de-linked. If somebody hasn't figured out what Nevada and Utah are by this point in the article, there's trouble in paradise, and again the time zone should be mentioned in prose. =-)
  • It's a good article if that's the most dirt I can pick out, congrats =-) Dave ( talk) 01:22, 11 October 2008 (UTC) reply

Support - Issues resolved to my satafaction. for the record I would still prefer SR-58 an an alternate shield, not a junction, but it's not that big of deal. Dave ( talk) 04:19, 16 October 2008 (UTC) reply

  • Oppose - a few issues, most minor, but a few major...
    • Lead - what departments of transportation?
    • You use cosigned 3 times in 2 sentences.
    • Blvd = Boulevard
    • RD - ex- should probably not be used.
    • How are you sourcing the locations of the businesses?
    • However comma to access...
    • You suddenly switch to mentioning SR 58 in the second half of the RD. That is a bit confusing.
    • History is hard to follow - maybe I'm just tired but it is hard to connect how SR 58 relates with the rest of it. Of course, one could look at the lead again, but that's a pain.
    • You mention SR 224 in the lead, and it is never mentioned in the history.
    • Please consider combining the Google Maps cites.
    • Not that I necessarily agree with this, but an advisory that a FAC reviewer could criticize sourcing using photographs as OR. Just a warning. -- Rschen7754 ( T C) 09:25, 17 November 2008 (UTC) reply
The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

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