The Peru national football team article has been greatly improved since the last check was done. At the moment, Peru's football article actually stands out as looking as one of the best. Yet, the most serious problem that prevented the article from being considered for something much better has been the lack of citations several parts of the article has (which is mainly a problem that roots itself not from false statements, but rather from the lack of citations the Spanish article from which the information was taken had). Football is the most popular sport of Peru, so lets show Wikipedia that a great article can be made about the nation's team.
I'm making this peer review request on behalf of MarshalN20 who is one of the main contributors to the article and wrote the introduction shown above. -- Victor12 19:30, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
Here are some comments:
It seems to me this article needs some major restructuring as it currently has too many sections some of which contain redundant information. A good starting point for improvements is Wikipedia:WikiProject Football/National teams which provides a model on how to organize national teams articles. To comply with its guidelines the following recommendations should be implemented:
That's all for now, there's great potential for this article, but it needs major work by dedicated editors
The Peru national football team article has been greatly improved since the last check was done. At the moment, Peru's football article actually stands out as looking as one of the best. Yet, the most serious problem that prevented the article from being considered for something much better has been the lack of citations several parts of the article has (which is mainly a problem that roots itself not from false statements, but rather from the lack of citations the Spanish article from which the information was taken had). Football is the most popular sport of Peru, so lets show Wikipedia that a great article can be made about the nation's team.
I'm making this peer review request on behalf of MarshalN20 who is one of the main contributors to the article and wrote the introduction shown above. -- Victor12 19:30, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
Here are some comments:
It seems to me this article needs some major restructuring as it currently has too many sections some of which contain redundant information. A good starting point for improvements is Wikipedia:WikiProject Football/National teams which provides a model on how to organize national teams articles. To comply with its guidelines the following recommendations should be implemented:
That's all for now, there's great potential for this article, but it needs major work by dedicated editors