This article has been greatly expanded in the last six months. Can someone take a look and let me know what still should be done? Thanks, Kweeket 01:14, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
- some minor observations.
- what are the }} at the end of the article.
- the characters could be fleshed out more with more description.
- The two quotations (I take it that is what they are) should be marked by double quotes " and pairs of single quotes. That would mean they are in italics and also surrounded by the double quotes. This makes it plain they are quotes. The references are good, more of these is always better.
- Hope that helps some. ::
Kevinalewis :
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08:23, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
- Great, thanks for the input. I deleted the }} (typo in a citation) and italicized the quotes. Kweeket 16:54, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
This article has been greatly expanded in the last six months. Can someone take a look and let me know what still should be done? Thanks, Kweeket 01:14, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
- some minor observations.
- what are the }} at the end of the article.
- the characters could be fleshed out more with more description.
- The two quotations (I take it that is what they are) should be marked by double quotes " and pairs of single quotes. That would mean they are in italics and also surrounded by the double quotes. This makes it plain they are quotes. The references are good, more of these is always better.
- Hope that helps some. ::
Kevinalewis :
(Talk Page)/
(Desk)
08:23, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
- Great, thanks for the input. I deleted the }} (typo in a citation) and italicized the quotes. Kweeket 16:54, 24 September 2007 (UTC)