Thomas Hines is high on my list on subjects I wanted to reach FA sometime. I have made a major overhaul of the article, and request it be inspected to see if it could pass a GA review.-- King Bedford I Seek his grace 02:21, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
Overall, a good article, some comments:
140 pounds
)So, overall, there are a lot of problems with prose. It needs a good read-through before any FAC, though it seems to be complete. It just needs finishing now. Some more references are needed in places, though I think it will be ready for GAN after you fix some of the above issues. If you have any questions, you can leave them at my talkpage or here. Regards. Woody ( talk) 12:11, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
It's a very good start, and I learned a lot from reading it. Here are some comments:
Besides that I don't see any real problems. It is an excellent B-class, and would probably pass GAN now. I wish you luck on A-Class and FA. Borg Sphere ( talk) 14:48, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
Thomas Hines is high on my list on subjects I wanted to reach FA sometime. I have made a major overhaul of the article, and request it be inspected to see if it could pass a GA review.-- King Bedford I Seek his grace 02:21, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
Overall, a good article, some comments:
140 pounds
)So, overall, there are a lot of problems with prose. It needs a good read-through before any FAC, though it seems to be complete. It just needs finishing now. Some more references are needed in places, though I think it will be ready for GAN after you fix some of the above issues. If you have any questions, you can leave them at my talkpage or here. Regards. Woody ( talk) 12:11, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
It's a very good start, and I learned a lot from reading it. Here are some comments:
Besides that I don't see any real problems. It is an excellent B-class, and would probably pass GAN now. I wish you luck on A-Class and FA. Borg Sphere ( talk) 14:48, 6 August 2008 (UTC)