I have significantly edited and improved this article recently, and was seeking any ideas and suggestions for improvement. I have nominated it for GA, and am currently waiting for a willing editor to review it and asertain whether it meets the GA criteria. In the mean time, I have decided to conduct a peer review. Any and all comments welcome. Thanks in advance, Abraham, B.S. ( talk) 12:05, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
Looking very good. A few comments:
I have significantly edited and improved this article recently, and was seeking any ideas and suggestions for improvement. I have nominated it for GA, and am currently waiting for a willing editor to review it and asertain whether it meets the GA criteria. In the mean time, I have decided to conduct a peer review. Any and all comments welcome. Thanks in advance, Abraham, B.S. ( talk) 12:05, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
Looking very good. A few comments: