Was recently rated as B-class, and I am looking for advice as to how to reach at least GA-class. ∗ \ / ( ⁂) 22:05, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
Very nice article. Without going through line-by-line, a few things that stand out:
Cheers, Ian Rose ( talk) 22:41, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
My comments are:
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On 20 September, Birks' platoon was advancing in Glencourse Wood, Ypres, Belgium. Birks, accompanied by Corporal W. Johnston, rushed forward to attack a pillbox. They were attacked with bombs, and the corporal was serioudly wounded in the confrontation. Birks continued alone to reach the rear of the pillbox, forcing the garrison to surrender.
On 20 September, Birks' platoon was advancing in Glencourse Wood, Ypres, Belgium. Birks, accompanied by Corporal W. Johnston, rushed forward to attack a pillbox. They were attacked with bombs, and Johnston was serioudly wounded. Birks continued on alone reaching the rear of the pillbox, he forced the occupants to surrender. Do we know how ? and disamb Pillbox
Not long afterwards, Birks attacked another strongpoint as a part of a small party, capturing up to sixteen men and wounding nine others. Part of a small party can we change party as it sound like they were going out to enjoy themselves. Could use unit, troop, platoon, section
Good job on the article, and good luck with the GA nom. -- Patar knight - chat/ contributions 21:42, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
Was recently rated as B-class, and I am looking for advice as to how to reach at least GA-class. ∗ \ / ( ⁂) 22:05, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
Very nice article. Without going through line-by-line, a few things that stand out:
Cheers, Ian Rose ( talk) 22:41, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
My comments are:
Comments
On 20 September, Birks' platoon was advancing in Glencourse Wood, Ypres, Belgium. Birks, accompanied by Corporal W. Johnston, rushed forward to attack a pillbox. They were attacked with bombs, and the corporal was serioudly wounded in the confrontation. Birks continued alone to reach the rear of the pillbox, forcing the garrison to surrender.
On 20 September, Birks' platoon was advancing in Glencourse Wood, Ypres, Belgium. Birks, accompanied by Corporal W. Johnston, rushed forward to attack a pillbox. They were attacked with bombs, and Johnston was serioudly wounded. Birks continued on alone reaching the rear of the pillbox, he forced the occupants to surrender. Do we know how ? and disamb Pillbox
Not long afterwards, Birks attacked another strongpoint as a part of a small party, capturing up to sixteen men and wounding nine others. Part of a small party can we change party as it sound like they were going out to enjoy themselves. Could use unit, troop, platoon, section
Good job on the article, and good luck with the GA nom. -- Patar knight - chat/ contributions 21:42, 12 April 2009 (UTC)