The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Nominator's comments: Unlike other recent nominations, I don't intend for this to head to FAC for a while. It's an interesting drive to take, and I think it's worthy of polishing up to the A-Class level. As for FAC, I have bigger fish for now.
First comment occurred: 21:02, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
Resolved issues from Dough4872 03:08, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Comments by Dough4872
I have some concerns with the article before I can support it for A-class:
Is it possible for major points of interest and termini to be listed in the infobox?
Are there any traffic counts from more recently than 2008?
"The road was originally known as the Sleeping Bear Dunes Park when he first opened it to the public in 1967.", is there a title that goes after "Sleeping Bear Dunes Park" such as road?
why is "4.11 m" in brackets and not parentheses? Dough4872 21:01, 25 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Will do.
Not from any press sources. The NPS doesn't log traffic counts on this road like MDOT does with its state highways.
Nope, that is the full, complete and total name, "Sleeping Bear Dunes Park".
The conversion is an addition to the quote, and like any added content in a quotation, it's in brackets. Imzadi 1979→ 02:13, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Support - Nice article. Dough4872 03:08, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Review by Rschen7754
I plan to review this article. --Rschen7754 23:38, 25 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Where's the stuff in the notes column coming from? --Rschen7754 07:38, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
It's all based on the NPS pamphlet. Imzadi 1979→ 07:41, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Would it be possible to cite it? Since it's a hardcoded header, it could just go in the header. --Rschen7754 07:50, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Lead
Copyedit done. --Rschen7754 08:30, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Route description
How much is the fee?
It depends. There's a whole
rate schedule based on whether or not the pass is being purchased for a vehicle or an individual, and if the pass is for a week or a year. Imzadi 1979→ 11:35, 30 October 2012 (UTC)reply
History
What are "these bluffs"?
The name was later changed to Pierce Stocking Scenic Drive in honor the man - of the man?
Was September 3rd Labor Day Weekend? --Rschen7754 05:09, 30 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Yes, it was the Saturday of Labor Day Weekend. Copy edits applied for the other two bullet points. Imzadi 1979→ 11:35, 30 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Might want to add that detail. --Rschen7754 19:27, 30 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Support; my issues have been resolved. –
TCN7JM 02:32, 18 November 2012 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Nominator's comments: Unlike other recent nominations, I don't intend for this to head to FAC for a while. It's an interesting drive to take, and I think it's worthy of polishing up to the A-Class level. As for FAC, I have bigger fish for now.
First comment occurred: 21:02, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
Resolved issues from Dough4872 03:08, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Comments by Dough4872
I have some concerns with the article before I can support it for A-class:
Is it possible for major points of interest and termini to be listed in the infobox?
Are there any traffic counts from more recently than 2008?
"The road was originally known as the Sleeping Bear Dunes Park when he first opened it to the public in 1967.", is there a title that goes after "Sleeping Bear Dunes Park" such as road?
why is "4.11 m" in brackets and not parentheses? Dough4872 21:01, 25 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Will do.
Not from any press sources. The NPS doesn't log traffic counts on this road like MDOT does with its state highways.
Nope, that is the full, complete and total name, "Sleeping Bear Dunes Park".
The conversion is an addition to the quote, and like any added content in a quotation, it's in brackets. Imzadi 1979→ 02:13, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Support - Nice article. Dough4872 03:08, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Review by Rschen7754
I plan to review this article. --Rschen7754 23:38, 25 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Where's the stuff in the notes column coming from? --Rschen7754 07:38, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
It's all based on the NPS pamphlet. Imzadi 1979→ 07:41, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Would it be possible to cite it? Since it's a hardcoded header, it could just go in the header. --Rschen7754 07:50, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Lead
Copyedit done. --Rschen7754 08:30, 26 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Route description
How much is the fee?
It depends. There's a whole
rate schedule based on whether or not the pass is being purchased for a vehicle or an individual, and if the pass is for a week or a year. Imzadi 1979→ 11:35, 30 October 2012 (UTC)reply
History
What are "these bluffs"?
The name was later changed to Pierce Stocking Scenic Drive in honor the man - of the man?
Was September 3rd Labor Day Weekend? --Rschen7754 05:09, 30 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Yes, it was the Saturday of Labor Day Weekend. Copy edits applied for the other two bullet points. Imzadi 1979→ 11:35, 30 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Might want to add that detail. --Rschen7754 19:27, 30 October 2012 (UTC)reply
Support; my issues have been resolved. –
TCN7JM 02:32, 18 November 2012 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.