As it stands, the article about the Bus Uncle, Roger Chan Yuet Tung is a Good Article. Last year, it was nominated for FA status, but failed. The major reason was the lack of citations. Anyway, I started improving the article over the last month.
I have improved the grammar, rearranged the layout, separated important points into different subsections, added fair use rationales to all 4 pictures and added citations to many paragraphs made in the article (through newspapar articles, magazine articles, radio programs, news reports and even a TV drama episode).
I would like the article be reviewed again, to see if there is any more room for improvement so as to reach FA level. Thanks-- Kylohk 09:59, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
I liked the article very much! I think it could go for FA status, but A-Class review in our project and GA review give you room for more feedback before the final FA nomination. Some (minor mostly) remarks:
Thank you for your review. I was getting worried that no one would ever bother to read it! Anyway, I made some changes based on your comments:
If there is anything else that I should pay attention to, please let me know.-- Kylohk 15:39, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
Let me reply to your comments 1 by 1.
Cheers.-- Kylohk 13:05, 6 May 2007 (UTC)
As it stands, the article about the Bus Uncle, Roger Chan Yuet Tung is a Good Article. Last year, it was nominated for FA status, but failed. The major reason was the lack of citations. Anyway, I started improving the article over the last month.
I have improved the grammar, rearranged the layout, separated important points into different subsections, added fair use rationales to all 4 pictures and added citations to many paragraphs made in the article (through newspapar articles, magazine articles, radio programs, news reports and even a TV drama episode).
I would like the article be reviewed again, to see if there is any more room for improvement so as to reach FA level. Thanks-- Kylohk 09:59, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
I liked the article very much! I think it could go for FA status, but A-Class review in our project and GA review give you room for more feedback before the final FA nomination. Some (minor mostly) remarks:
Thank you for your review. I was getting worried that no one would ever bother to read it! Anyway, I made some changes based on your comments:
If there is anything else that I should pay attention to, please let me know.-- Kylohk 15:39, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
Let me reply to your comments 1 by 1.
Cheers.-- Kylohk 13:05, 6 May 2007 (UTC)