I have requested a peer review because I am hoping to get this article to at least B status.
Dovcamp ( talk) 05:34, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The lead should have an appropriate number of paragraphs and summarize the article as a whole. [?]
- Please add some images. For example, there are some free use ones available of the seminary. [?]
- Please consider adding
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information. [?] - Headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==. [?]
- Ideally, you should provide footnotes for quotes and parts of the text where you refer to a source. For example, "which he referred to as "Selective Patronage"." and "He said, "I found that we needed training..." should be referenced.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan ( talk) 15:24, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
I have requested a peer review because I am hoping to get this article to at least B status.
Dovcamp ( talk) 05:34, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated with the aid of a semi-automatic javascript program.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The lead should have an appropriate number of paragraphs and summarize the article as a whole. [?]
- Please add some images. For example, there are some free use ones available of the seminary. [?]
- Please consider adding
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information. [?] - Headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==. [?]
- Ideally, you should provide footnotes for quotes and parts of the text where you refer to a source. For example, "which he referred to as "Selective Patronage"." and "He said, "I found that we needed training..." should be referenced.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan ( talk) 15:24, 20 June 2008 (UTC)