I'd hope to sometime have this article upgraded to Good Article status, and was hoping to get some advice on how to improve the article. I believe its current state just needs expansion of information surrounding possibly his collegiate career as well as his professional career.
CanbekEsen00:18, 25 March 2007 (UTC)reply
I think you should split the lead into paragraphs.
The prose problems are obvious from the lead. No variety in expression, which often gets choppy. Maybe you could find some assistance in the Lead of Copyeditors. This is a characteristic example of repetitive and problematic prose: "Howard, whose legs were bowed, had to have his legs below ...". And the monotonous "Howard did this ... Howard did that" gets tiring for the reader.
I've put up a {{copyedit}} tag but haven't had any responses. I'd do it myself, but I tend to get too POV.
CAN
The addition of a fair-use or public domain photo would be nice.
Note: "Fair use" would not be applicable, see
WP:NFCC#1. Josh Howard is still alive and has not retired, so it would be quite easy to produce or obtain a free photo of him (though his team did retire early from the playoffs so you might have to wait until next season). —
CharlotteWebb16:54, 25 May 2007 (UTC)reply
What about flickr.com? If given permission for a picture from a user, are we allowed to upload them under Creative Commons licensing? I've never gotten the hang of this copyright stuff.
CAN
The "cc-by-2.0" and "cc-by-sa-2.0" licenses are compatable with the GFDL (specifically, they permit derivative works and downstream commercial use, unlike the other CC licenses used by flickr) and are permission in themselves. Images under these licenses can be uploaded to Wikimedia projects as "free" content, without the need for specific consent or a "fair use" defense. However, you might like to send a congratulations/thank you note telling them that their work can now be found in Wikipedia articles. If the image you want is only available under a more restrictive license you can either ask them nicely to re-tag it (on flickr) to something more "free", or if they have privately given you consent (by e-mail for example) you would need to have them contact the project directly to confirm that they know what they are agreeing to. More information at the flickr upload page
[1]. —
CharlotteWebb15:24, 27 May 2007 (UTC)reply
"Howard earned third team All-ACC and second team NABC All-District while trailing Darius Songaila in team scoring with 13.9 points per game during his junior season." Avoid choppy paragraphs like this one. Merge or expand.
I'd hope to sometime have this article upgraded to Good Article status, and was hoping to get some advice on how to improve the article. I believe its current state just needs expansion of information surrounding possibly his collegiate career as well as his professional career.
CanbekEsen00:18, 25 March 2007 (UTC)reply
I think you should split the lead into paragraphs.
The prose problems are obvious from the lead. No variety in expression, which often gets choppy. Maybe you could find some assistance in the Lead of Copyeditors. This is a characteristic example of repetitive and problematic prose: "Howard, whose legs were bowed, had to have his legs below ...". And the monotonous "Howard did this ... Howard did that" gets tiring for the reader.
I've put up a {{copyedit}} tag but haven't had any responses. I'd do it myself, but I tend to get too POV.
CAN
The addition of a fair-use or public domain photo would be nice.
Note: "Fair use" would not be applicable, see
WP:NFCC#1. Josh Howard is still alive and has not retired, so it would be quite easy to produce or obtain a free photo of him (though his team did retire early from the playoffs so you might have to wait until next season). —
CharlotteWebb16:54, 25 May 2007 (UTC)reply
What about flickr.com? If given permission for a picture from a user, are we allowed to upload them under Creative Commons licensing? I've never gotten the hang of this copyright stuff.
CAN
The "cc-by-2.0" and "cc-by-sa-2.0" licenses are compatable with the GFDL (specifically, they permit derivative works and downstream commercial use, unlike the other CC licenses used by flickr) and are permission in themselves. Images under these licenses can be uploaded to Wikimedia projects as "free" content, without the need for specific consent or a "fair use" defense. However, you might like to send a congratulations/thank you note telling them that their work can now be found in Wikipedia articles. If the image you want is only available under a more restrictive license you can either ask them nicely to re-tag it (on flickr) to something more "free", or if they have privately given you consent (by e-mail for example) you would need to have them contact the project directly to confirm that they know what they are agreeing to. More information at the flickr upload page
[1]. —
CharlotteWebb15:24, 27 May 2007 (UTC)reply
"Howard earned third team All-ACC and second team NABC All-District while trailing Darius Songaila in team scoring with 13.9 points per game during his junior season." Avoid choppy paragraphs like this one. Merge or expand.