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Joseph Szigeti

I've been working on this article for a while now and my eventual goal is to get it up to Featured Article status. I think it's getting close to being a potential FA candidate, but I'd like any input on how to make it better. Thanks, K. Lásztocska talk 19:51, 3 January 2008 (UTC) reply

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  • The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • The first section looks a little crowded with the images and music sample.
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries should only be linked if they provide context for the article. [?]
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  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan ( talk) 18:00, 4 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Thanks. Anything else? K. Lásztocska talk 04:38, 7 January 2008 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Joseph Szigeti

I've been working on this article for a while now and my eventual goal is to get it up to Featured Article status. I think it's getting close to being a potential FA candidate, but I'd like any input on how to make it better. Thanks, K. Lásztocska talk 19:51, 3 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Javascript review

The following suggestions were generated with the aid of a semi-automatic javascript program.

  • The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article. [?]
  • The first section looks a little crowded with the images and music sample.
  • Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries should only be linked if they provide context for the article. [?]
  • Please add {{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}} along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information. [?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan ( talk) 18:00, 4 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Thanks. Anything else? K. Lásztocska talk 04:38, 7 January 2008 (UTC) reply

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