Let's try and clean this up and get it to good article quality Embassy 15:18, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
It is a start. There are many things that can be done to improve it though.
- The lead section needs extending. You may find it helpful to read this guideline to get an idea of how long this section should be and what it should contain.
- A good lead section is built around a strong and full article which it currently is not. Most if not all sections need expanding such as UFC and early life. These are all stubs at the moment.
- The television career section needs to be turned into prose. It is currently just a list.
There is a basis for a good article but it needs a lot of cleanup and the point of view questions will obviously need to be addressed. I hope that this is of some help. Woodym555 21:20, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
Let's try and clean this up and get it to good article quality Embassy 15:18, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
It is a start. There are many things that can be done to improve it though.
- The lead section needs extending. You may find it helpful to read this guideline to get an idea of how long this section should be and what it should contain.
- A good lead section is built around a strong and full article which it currently is not. Most if not all sections need expanding such as UFC and early life. These are all stubs at the moment.
- The television career section needs to be turned into prose. It is currently just a list.
There is a basis for a good article but it needs a lot of cleanup and the point of view questions will obviously need to be addressed. I hope that this is of some help. Woodym555 21:20, 22 June 2007 (UTC)