The editors would like for the group to make comments on areas that need improvement and any ideals for expansion.-- Oldwildbill 18:35, 29 August 2006 (UTC)
The prose looks to me fine, but, since I'm not a native English speaker, I'll let such judgements to other users. My remarks have to do with the structural problems the article has:
The only comment I would make is that the Awards section should be removed from the body since it is already in the infobox. -- plange 01:32, 9 September 2006 (UTC)
The editors would like for the group to make comments on areas that need improvement and any ideals for expansion.-- Oldwildbill 18:35, 29 August 2006 (UTC)
The prose looks to me fine, but, since I'm not a native English speaker, I'll let such judgements to other users. My remarks have to do with the structural problems the article has:
The only comment I would make is that the Awards section should be removed from the body since it is already in the infobox. -- plange 01:32, 9 September 2006 (UTC)