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I'm planning to expand the article further and make it a GA someday. Any suggestions? --
Commander
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09:54, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
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- Brief comments from Nikkimaria
- The article is in need of a bit of copy-editing - you might add a request over at the
guild.
- Any other information about family and early life available?
- "she established herself as one of the leading actresses in Bollywood." - source?
Y Done --
Commander
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16:05, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
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- "is perhaps best remembered for her glamour, style, and accomplished classical dancing" - source?
Y Done --
Commander
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16:05, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
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- What was the name of the magazine for which she owned the editorship?
Y Done --
Commander
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16:06, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
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Y Already done
Commander
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08:50, 2 July 2011 (UTC)
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- Thanks for your suggestions. Any other you got to say apart from the above mentioned ones. --
Commander
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16:05, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
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- I don't know much about the topic, so that's I think all I'll say about it. The one remaining major issue is copy-editing.
Nikkimaria (
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12:44, 2 July 2011 (UTC)
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- Thanks again! I'll be expanding the career section probably with in a couple of days, before submitting the
request for copy-edit. --
Commander
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12:51, 2 July 2011 (UTC)
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