The article on Gwen Shamblin goes through a lot - from vandalism to well-meaning edits that can take away large chunks of information. I've been adding cites to this for a couple of months, but would really like some feedback on how to make this article the best bio of a living person it can possibly be. Also, extra feedback would help me get sections and ideas tacked down with unbiased input from others. Please let me know what I can do to even out the tone and keep information on Gwen Shamblin as comprehensive and NPOV as possible. Efkeathley 13:45, 29 May 2007 (UTC) reply

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