I was hoping to submit this for FA, but wanted someone else to review it first to help make sure it's ready to go.
Coemgenus 15:08, 24 February 2008 (UTC)reply
Some minor points
Repetition of the family surname in "Cleveland was the fifth of nine children born to Richard and Ann Cleveland" and "The Clevelands had five children:
Ruth Cleveland (1891–1904);
Esther Cleveland (1893–1980); Marion Cleveland (1895–1977);
Richard Folsom Cleveland (1897–1974); and Francis Grover Cleveland (1903–1995)." is slightly tedious.
The sections on Supreme Court appointments and Utah's admission to the Union are very short. I would either turn them into infoboxes or merge them with other sections.
The secondary sources lack publisher information, but the section is already lengthy, so I don't know whether adding them would be worthwhile.
I enjoyed reading the article, it held my interest all the way through.
DrKiernan (
talk) 15:29, 28 February 2008 (UTC)reply
I was hoping to submit this for FA, but wanted someone else to review it first to help make sure it's ready to go.
Coemgenus 15:08, 24 February 2008 (UTC)reply
Some minor points
Repetition of the family surname in "Cleveland was the fifth of nine children born to Richard and Ann Cleveland" and "The Clevelands had five children:
Ruth Cleveland (1891–1904);
Esther Cleveland (1893–1980); Marion Cleveland (1895–1977);
Richard Folsom Cleveland (1897–1974); and Francis Grover Cleveland (1903–1995)." is slightly tedious.
The sections on Supreme Court appointments and Utah's admission to the Union are very short. I would either turn them into infoboxes or merge them with other sections.
The secondary sources lack publisher information, but the section is already lengthy, so I don't know whether adding them would be worthwhile.
I enjoyed reading the article, it held my interest all the way through.
DrKiernan (
talk) 15:29, 28 February 2008 (UTC)reply