I've done a major rewrite on this article and would like to work towards getting it elevated to Good Article status. Any advice on what I can do to eventually get it to that point would be very appreciated. --
Maelwys 14:42, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply
"Off-air work", "Charity work" and "Home Life" are stubby. Merge or expand.
I'll hold off on this one for now, see if I can find a way to expand them, and merge them if I can't. --
Maelwys 20:31, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply
"Davis and Rob, her husband of 18 years, have a 15-year-old daughter, Lauren." Uncyclopedic and not-comprehensive: who is Rob? His full name? Is Davis his name and Erin took it after they got married or not? When did they get married?
This one's a bit hard because her husband isn't a public figure and his last name isn't a matter of public record. I've reworded this section to try to make it a bit more comprehensive
I suggest you turn "Honours and awards" into proper prose.
5 from your 6 citations are from the same magazine. You need a wider range of sources.--
Yannismarou 16:31, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply
Yeah, unfortunately that magazine was the only local periodical I could find with an expansive archive of old articles posted online. The other ones that I know wrote stories about her all did so several years ago, but only keep a couple weeks of archives online. Thanks for all the advice! --
Maelwys 20:31, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply
I've done a major rewrite on this article and would like to work towards getting it elevated to Good Article status. Any advice on what I can do to eventually get it to that point would be very appreciated. --
Maelwys 14:42, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply
"Off-air work", "Charity work" and "Home Life" are stubby. Merge or expand.
I'll hold off on this one for now, see if I can find a way to expand them, and merge them if I can't. --
Maelwys 20:31, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply
"Davis and Rob, her husband of 18 years, have a 15-year-old daughter, Lauren." Uncyclopedic and not-comprehensive: who is Rob? His full name? Is Davis his name and Erin took it after they got married or not? When did they get married?
This one's a bit hard because her husband isn't a public figure and his last name isn't a matter of public record. I've reworded this section to try to make it a bit more comprehensive
I suggest you turn "Honours and awards" into proper prose.
5 from your 6 citations are from the same magazine. You need a wider range of sources.--
Yannismarou 16:31, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply
Yeah, unfortunately that magazine was the only local periodical I could find with an expansive archive of old articles posted online. The other ones that I know wrote stories about her all did so several years ago, but only keep a couple weeks of archives online. Thanks for all the advice! --
Maelwys 20:31, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply