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BlackSun21:55, 27 November 2006 (UTC)reply
The article looks to me comprehensive and informative, but there are several problems. Most importantly:
There are no inline citations.
Some sections are full of one-sentence paragraphs, like "Mark Prophet". In this case I recommend rewriting.
You could create a seperate article about the doctrine, and have here a summary of it. The current section is too long and not strictly related to Prophet's life, but to her church as well.
These red links in the lead are not so nice. Delink them or create stubs.
Why 5 paragraphs in the lead? And why the last one is so stubby. Check
WP:LEAD to see how a lead should be exactly.
ISBNs and publshers in books?
"Controversial Issues" are also more about the church and not about Prophet. I thnik that you should think what material should remain in this article and what should go to a sub-article or to the church's article.--
Yannismarou12:16, 29 November 2006 (UTC)reply
This is a request for peer review by scholars, Wikipedians, and other interested parties prior to nominating this article for GA status.
BlackSun21:55, 27 November 2006 (UTC)reply
The article looks to me comprehensive and informative, but there are several problems. Most importantly:
There are no inline citations.
Some sections are full of one-sentence paragraphs, like "Mark Prophet". In this case I recommend rewriting.
You could create a seperate article about the doctrine, and have here a summary of it. The current section is too long and not strictly related to Prophet's life, but to her church as well.
These red links in the lead are not so nice. Delink them or create stubs.
Why 5 paragraphs in the lead? And why the last one is so stubby. Check
WP:LEAD to see how a lead should be exactly.
ISBNs and publshers in books?
"Controversial Issues" are also more about the church and not about Prophet. I thnik that you should think what material should remain in this article and what should go to a sub-article or to the church's article.--
Yannismarou12:16, 29 November 2006 (UTC)reply