I have written this entry about my Father-In-Law and would like to make it into a proper encyclopaedia type entry. As this was my first, I am looking for pointers as to how I can improve it over all. I would love it to be so good as to become a Featured Article. Atellyer ( talk) 20:20, 12 May 2009 (UTC)
I have written this entry about my Father-In-Law and would like to make it into a proper encyclopaedia type entry. As this was my first, I am looking for pointers as to how I can improve it over all. I would love it to be so good as to become a Featured Article. Atellyer ( talk) 20:20, 12 May 2009 (UTC)