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I'd like to improve upon this article and bring it up to a good or a good article rating. Please make any suggestions necessary.
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Eulogy4Afriend
18:34, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
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It needs work. Some suggestions:
- The article must acquire a proper lead per
WP:LEAD, and a proper structure per
WP:LAYOUT. As it is now the structure is problematic.
- The article should also be properly cited per
WP:CITE.
- Try to avoid stubby sections like "Personal history".
- Trim the "see also" section, and incorporate the links in the main text, if they are really necessary.
- Alphabetize categories at the end of the article.
- Why is the article's title "Dr Billy Campbell" and not "Billy Campbell" or "Billy Campbell (doctor)" if there is a disamb. problem?
- Expand the article with more infos. Right now it is somewhere between stub- and start-class.--
Yannismarou
10:21, 9 January 2007 (UTC)
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