This article about a Japanese singer had a lot of speculation/personal opinion and almost no references when I started editing it. Since then, I've provided about 90% of the references, removed unconfirmable statements and personal opinion, and added necessary sections. I'm hoping to eventually turn it into a featured article. I'm especially hoping for constructive criticism concerning the lead section and flow of the article, but any feedback is appreciated. Thanatous ( talk) 04:06, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
The article is comprehensive, well-written and well-cited. Well-done! (Your username is "thanatous"; do you know that in Greek "thanatos" [without the "u"!] means death?!)-- Yannismarou ( talk) 12:29, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
This article about a Japanese singer had a lot of speculation/personal opinion and almost no references when I started editing it. Since then, I've provided about 90% of the references, removed unconfirmable statements and personal opinion, and added necessary sections. I'm hoping to eventually turn it into a featured article. I'm especially hoping for constructive criticism concerning the lead section and flow of the article, but any feedback is appreciated. Thanatous ( talk) 04:06, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
The article is comprehensive, well-written and well-cited. Well-done! (Your username is "thanatous"; do you know that in Greek "thanatos" [without the "u"!] means death?!)-- Yannismarou ( talk) 12:29, 28 April 2008 (UTC)