In the lead you have a whole seperate paragraph with its full name. I don't know if this is definitely necessary.
You don't have any information about his early years. Isn't there any available?
What was the "Palmyrene Empire", the "Gallic Empire" and the "Sassanid Empire". You should offer us some explanations I think.
After adding inline citations, you should reorganize "References and further reading". You put the sources you used in "References" and further material in "Further reading". "External links" is usually a seperate section.
Alphabetize categories at the end of the article.
I think you could add a section with assessments about Aurelian or with an analysis of his legacy, if the sources offer such a possibility.--
Yannismarou09:11, 4 November 2006 (UTC)reply
In the lead you have a whole seperate paragraph with its full name. I don't know if this is definitely necessary.
You don't have any information about his early years. Isn't there any available?
What was the "Palmyrene Empire", the "Gallic Empire" and the "Sassanid Empire". You should offer us some explanations I think.
After adding inline citations, you should reorganize "References and further reading". You put the sources you used in "References" and further material in "Further reading". "External links" is usually a seperate section.
Alphabetize categories at the end of the article.
I think you could add a section with assessments about Aurelian or with an analysis of his legacy, if the sources offer such a possibility.--
Yannismarou09:11, 4 November 2006 (UTC)reply