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My Draft is declined Rishabhpathania1 ( talk) 09:59, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
I am struggling with how I can improve this text. This is only my second time creating a wiki page so would massively appreciate some advice. Many thanks :) Chevsi ( talk) 10:35, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Hello everyone, I have been submitting my article for more than 4 months and still have no feedback. Please kindly help and inform me if there are actions needed from me Thank you very much Kind Regards Ryan Saigon ( talk) 11:10, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Hello, I have made adjustments on this wikipage, highly referenced, its been 4/5 months since last review. I feel this page should be moved to the main page now, or would welcome any further advice. S6GHSAM4 ( talk) 12:03, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
I have moved Article to mainspace because I was confident to move them. I am writing on Psychology, Psychologist and Mental Health. Kindly look into this article and suggest me, it will help me to progress in writing. Gauravdelhi.wiki ( talk) 15:54, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
I do not understand what I should edit here? WikiWanderer90 ( talk) 18:47, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
It is the first time I write a contribution to the English wikipedia so I would know how to resolve the issue. The article about an Italian composer living in New York City was declined as it looked "promotional", so maybe I did not do something important? I tried to be as exhaustive as I could with this artist I admire and follow. Also the user said she/he is not sure it meets the guidelines on notability. The guidelines talk about reliable sources. I have inserted some sources in the link section - should I insert them as notes whenever something is mentioned? I tried to be as far as I could from "advertising" when writing about the artist, just listing some of the bio notes in my possession. I can reduce the article much more if needed. Thank you in advance for the answer, Barbara Ilghibellinfuggiasco ( talk) 18:51, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
I tried to create a page but it was declined.
Anunarwana (
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Born in the serene village of Akhri, near the historical city of Kanpur, Shri Hit Premanand Ji Maharaj's life is an embodiment of dedication, spirituality, and unwavering devotion. His birth name, Aniruddh Kumar Pandey, might be lesser-known, but his spiritual journey from a young boy to a revered figure in Vrindavan is a testament to his profound faith in Lord Krishna and Radha Rani. And that drivel is only the beginning. Your draft goes on and on and on with the same utterly inappropriate style. If this person is notable (which I truly do not know), then every word of your current version needs to be removed, and new content written with rigorous neutrality. Cullen328 ( talk) 06:57, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
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My Draft is declined Rishabhpathania1 ( talk) 09:59, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
I am struggling with how I can improve this text. This is only my second time creating a wiki page so would massively appreciate some advice. Many thanks :) Chevsi ( talk) 10:35, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Hello everyone, I have been submitting my article for more than 4 months and still have no feedback. Please kindly help and inform me if there are actions needed from me Thank you very much Kind Regards Ryan Saigon ( talk) 11:10, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Hello, I have made adjustments on this wikipage, highly referenced, its been 4/5 months since last review. I feel this page should be moved to the main page now, or would welcome any further advice. S6GHSAM4 ( talk) 12:03, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
I have moved Article to mainspace because I was confident to move them. I am writing on Psychology, Psychologist and Mental Health. Kindly look into this article and suggest me, it will help me to progress in writing. Gauravdelhi.wiki ( talk) 15:54, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
I do not understand what I should edit here? WikiWanderer90 ( talk) 18:47, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
It is the first time I write a contribution to the English wikipedia so I would know how to resolve the issue. The article about an Italian composer living in New York City was declined as it looked "promotional", so maybe I did not do something important? I tried to be as exhaustive as I could with this artist I admire and follow. Also the user said she/he is not sure it meets the guidelines on notability. The guidelines talk about reliable sources. I have inserted some sources in the link section - should I insert them as notes whenever something is mentioned? I tried to be as far as I could from "advertising" when writing about the artist, just listing some of the bio notes in my possession. I can reduce the article much more if needed. Thank you in advance for the answer, Barbara Ilghibellinfuggiasco ( talk) 18:51, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
I tried to create a page but it was declined.
Anunarwana (
talk)
23:12, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Born in the serene village of Akhri, near the historical city of Kanpur, Shri Hit Premanand Ji Maharaj's life is an embodiment of dedication, spirituality, and unwavering devotion. His birth name, Aniruddh Kumar Pandey, might be lesser-known, but his spiritual journey from a young boy to a revered figure in Vrindavan is a testament to his profound faith in Lord Krishna and Radha Rani. And that drivel is only the beginning. Your draft goes on and on and on with the same utterly inappropriate style. If this person is notable (which I truly do not know), then every word of your current version needs to be removed, and new content written with rigorous neutrality. Cullen328 ( talk) 06:57, 9 August 2023 (UTC)