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Leila Jeffreys 72 (
talk)
01:05, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Hello. Thank you for taking the time to re-review this submission. I have a couple of issues I'm hoping you can offer advice on.
1. This is not an autobiography. I am an independent contractor compiling resources for Leila and thought it best to create a page for her using details she can easily access when I am no longer working directly for her. If you feel it would be beneficial to create a new Wikipedia account with my own details rather than Leila's, I can resubmit that way. Could you pls let me know if this will be helpful?
2. I've received feedback that Leila does not satisfy the notability criteria for creative arts. I have reviewed these criteria and I am hopeful that you will revise this assertion. She's the subject of a 30-minute documentary commissioned by Australia's national broadcaster, the Australian Broadcasting Corporation (criteria 3). She's exhibited her artworks in Australia, Hong Kong, the USA and the UK (criteria 3 & 4). Her work has been included in public exhibitions and is part of many private collections around the world (criteria 3 & 4). She has been featured in notable, reliable and objective publications all over the world also and with her most recent exhibition in Australia she was the subject of major features in numerous well-regarded titles (The Sydney Morning Herald, The Guardian, Australian Geographic, Art Almanac, Art Daily, Artist Profile etc ) (criteria 1). She has been interviewed extensively because of the unique way she is able to present her subjects (criteria 2). She has also published her work in book-format at the request of major publishers both here in Australia as well as in North America and the UK (criteria 3). I've kept her entry deliberately brief and avoided hyperbole - there's nothing misleading in her entry. Some of the references I have supplied link back to Leila's website b/c she has been very diligent in keeping track of her own press and some of the articles published on her are no longer available online, however, they are genuine articles and can be accessed via her website.
To quote the former curator of Australia's National Portrait Gallery, Dr Sarah Engledow, Leila's work is "simultaneously serious and witty, gentle and impactful; technically, they are quite miraculous. Her rapport with her subjects, her technical ingenuity, her eye for colour, form and composition and her expertise in the processes of fine art photography combine to create singular works that have often – alas – been imitated but have never come close to being equalled.”
I am hopeful this clarification will aid the justification of Leila's case for a wikipedia entry.
Thanks again for your time,
Mel
I would like to get feedback on the edits made .. I resubmitted in December with a much more comprehensive article and list of references. If additional edits are needed, I would appreciate feedback so I can make those changes. Thank you!
Contrary.Carrie ( talk) 02:10, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I believe the band qualifies for notability for several reasons:
If there is more needed to get this published, I would greatly appreciate the feedback. THANK YOU again!! Contrary.Carrie ( talk) 04:46, 14 February 2020 (UTC)
I wanted to check how to edit this article further. Are the establishments within the mall considered advertisement? What aspects of the mall should I focus on? Thank you!
Viditalk14 (
talk)
03:53, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
This article is inspired by the same title in Mandarin. Please go read it. Everything written is based on what already happened. I don't see anything wrong here for truth being documented.
This Wikipedia, should be helpful to me, to create articles. That means I need serious advice.
VodkaWaka ( talk) 05:00, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I have already added the citation in the footnotes then why my draft is declined again. I want to know the real reason for rejection. Kindly help me as i want to correct my draft Lerocque.
Mahul sharma ( talk) 06:49, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
The reviewer said that the article seems to be a news report of a single event and may not be notable enough for an article. It is true that the article emphasizes the Brussels airport terror attack in 2016 as Nidhi (the article is about her) rose to prominence as a survivor of the attack. Post that, she has been a well-known leader of the employees agitation to revive the now defunct Jet Airways. She has also published her memoir last months and is currently touring the country launching her book. Therefore, given that she is a well-known person due to the attack, her Jet Airways activism and her book (along with multiple awards and talks), we would like to further emphasize the fact that the article is about Nidhi and her journey and not only about the terror attack although that is prominently mentioned in the article. Kindly do review the article and let us know if we can make certain edits which would allow the article to become notable enough for publication on Wikipedia. Thank you so very much! :) Samantakbhadra ( talk) 09:31, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Hello there,
I am requesting assistance to discuss the decline of the submission. My Wikipedia submission was based on another laundry company that is published here. This is the page: /info/en/?search=Pressto
I believe my referencing was stronger than theirs, because mine proves that "Laundry by time signature" was awarded by ISEA for being the best Laundry Service. In my understanding, anybody given prestigious awards that prove the quality of their services to be at the forefront of their industry is notable enough but I might be wrong. Can you please help me point out what might be lacking from my end?
Thank you for the support, I admire every volunteer for their service. I\
Nayabks (
talk)
09:43, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I read the articles and understand your points. So I'll forget the Pressto page. As per the Notability of a company or organization, I do understand now exactly what is required. I had mistakenly tagged the wrong ISEA page, I was able to find an article that will fulfill the requirement: here's the award being independently covered by a top Nigerian news source:
https://www.thisdaylive.com/index.php/2019/04/16/laundrybytimesignature-others-win-award/
This Day has a wikipedia page too. If I edit this source into the article and change the ISEA part, will this page be good to come alive?
Thank you!
P.S. this is the ISEA page: https://www.iso.org/iso-awards.html these are called international standard excellence awards
Nayabks ( talk) 08:51, 15 February 2020 (UTC)
Hello Wikipedians!
I'm requesting help because I want to understand the objections on my draft so that I can effectively work on improving the draft. There are 2 main objections:
What I'm unable to understand about the verifiability of a reference is, what determines if the website is seen as a good 3rd party source? Because I have posted news sites like "Market watch" as one of the references but even those didn't pass. On top of that, some of the top Indian entrepreneur news sites were also declined, such as: "Silicon India".
I am neutral about the topic and had written from a neutral point of view. But I don't see what went wrong. If it's possible to get highlights of that, that will be very helpful, if not, how can I find an editor who will be willing to improve my writing?
Lastly, I have 9 more articles that were recently uploaded about this entrepreneur. Can you check the list and let me know if any of these websites are considered credible enough?
http://www.globestats.com/meet-romy-johnson-who-made-3-5-crores-in-a-year-being-an-edtech-entrepreneur/ http://www.vernamagazine.com/2020/02/08/brilliant-entrepreneur-romy-johnson-is-helping-thousands-to-study-abroad/ http://www.fabworldtoday.com/the-incredible-success-of-the-21-year-old-entrepreneur-romy-johnson-turns-into-a-sensation-in-the-business-community/ http://www.openthenews.com/romy-johnson-youngest-indian-edtech-millionaire-entrepreneur-speaks-for-the-first-time/ http://www.usaherald.online/romy-johnson-from-a-college-student-to-successful-edtech-entrepreneur/ http://www.featureweekly.com/amazing-success-of-romy-johnson-catches-edtech-industry-by-surprise/ http://www.broadcastcover.com/simple-edtech-businesses-earn-romy-johnson-3-5-crores-in-a-year/ http://www.ustimesnow.com/romy-johnson-indias-talented-self-made-edtech-entrepreneur/ http://www.allnewsbuzz.com/want-to-be-a-millionaire-learn-from-romy-johnson-who-made-it-as-a-successful-edtech-entrepreneur/
Thank you for your help, I admire and respect the service that every volunteer adds to the platform and makes it possible to be maintained. Cheers!
Nayabks ( talk) 09:59, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Added extra references to various websites. Updated information with latest band information.
DoeEyed (
talk)
10:46, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I'm looking for guidance in terms of setting up the OakNorth page. I'm an employer at the company but i've been careful to follow guidelines provided in terms of ensuring the entry is fully factual and that all key points are linked / referenced with multiple impartial sources.
Please do let me know if you're able to help.
thank you
TomPaveySmith ( talk) 10:55, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I don't care to put work into this. If somebody else wants to fix it they can. Updating this info was harder than I thought it would be.
Nickkane8 ( talk) 11:26, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Redokcart (
talk)
11:33, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Hi, This page was created taking reference from the page of Jeremy Stoppelman. Could you please re-look at it and guide on how can it be improved. The references provided includes Forbes, Reuters, Yahoo Finance and Buzzfeed. Any help would be appreciated. Thanking you. 47.23.95.170 ( talk) 14:59, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
1. http://www.openthenews.com/how-victor-smushkevich-cracked-search-engine-optimization/
3. https://www.forbes.com/sites/forbesagencycouncil/people/victorsmushkevich/#e22710c79717
4. https://in.news.yahoo.com/victor-smushkevich-built-7-figure-195259873.html
8. https://www.openthenews.com/how-victor-smushkevich-cracked-search-engine-optimization/
9. https://techbullion.com/how-victor-smushkevich-built-a-7-figure-business-without-finishing-college/
The content is based on the press release on ISO TC292 online website, but I wrote that press release and have permission to include it for the wikipedia page. Plus the information has been modified and restructured but some wording has to remain the same as it is referring to the content of a published standard so you don't want to change the wording too much
Bank.jeanne ( talk) 20:40, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Bapsyata (
talk)
21:11, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
multiple authentic sources have been added as the reference for the support of my article on Hi-Care Group Mahadi H ( talk) 22:49, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I have added the full discography of the artist to the page, to prove the work of the artist. Catture ( talk) 23:14, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
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Leila Jeffreys 72 (
talk)
01:05, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Hello. Thank you for taking the time to re-review this submission. I have a couple of issues I'm hoping you can offer advice on.
1. This is not an autobiography. I am an independent contractor compiling resources for Leila and thought it best to create a page for her using details she can easily access when I am no longer working directly for her. If you feel it would be beneficial to create a new Wikipedia account with my own details rather than Leila's, I can resubmit that way. Could you pls let me know if this will be helpful?
2. I've received feedback that Leila does not satisfy the notability criteria for creative arts. I have reviewed these criteria and I am hopeful that you will revise this assertion. She's the subject of a 30-minute documentary commissioned by Australia's national broadcaster, the Australian Broadcasting Corporation (criteria 3). She's exhibited her artworks in Australia, Hong Kong, the USA and the UK (criteria 3 & 4). Her work has been included in public exhibitions and is part of many private collections around the world (criteria 3 & 4). She has been featured in notable, reliable and objective publications all over the world also and with her most recent exhibition in Australia she was the subject of major features in numerous well-regarded titles (The Sydney Morning Herald, The Guardian, Australian Geographic, Art Almanac, Art Daily, Artist Profile etc ) (criteria 1). She has been interviewed extensively because of the unique way she is able to present her subjects (criteria 2). She has also published her work in book-format at the request of major publishers both here in Australia as well as in North America and the UK (criteria 3). I've kept her entry deliberately brief and avoided hyperbole - there's nothing misleading in her entry. Some of the references I have supplied link back to Leila's website b/c she has been very diligent in keeping track of her own press and some of the articles published on her are no longer available online, however, they are genuine articles and can be accessed via her website.
To quote the former curator of Australia's National Portrait Gallery, Dr Sarah Engledow, Leila's work is "simultaneously serious and witty, gentle and impactful; technically, they are quite miraculous. Her rapport with her subjects, her technical ingenuity, her eye for colour, form and composition and her expertise in the processes of fine art photography combine to create singular works that have often – alas – been imitated but have never come close to being equalled.”
I am hopeful this clarification will aid the justification of Leila's case for a wikipedia entry.
Thanks again for your time,
Mel
I would like to get feedback on the edits made .. I resubmitted in December with a much more comprehensive article and list of references. If additional edits are needed, I would appreciate feedback so I can make those changes. Thank you!
Contrary.Carrie ( talk) 02:10, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I believe the band qualifies for notability for several reasons:
If there is more needed to get this published, I would greatly appreciate the feedback. THANK YOU again!! Contrary.Carrie ( talk) 04:46, 14 February 2020 (UTC)
I wanted to check how to edit this article further. Are the establishments within the mall considered advertisement? What aspects of the mall should I focus on? Thank you!
Viditalk14 (
talk)
03:53, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
This article is inspired by the same title in Mandarin. Please go read it. Everything written is based on what already happened. I don't see anything wrong here for truth being documented.
This Wikipedia, should be helpful to me, to create articles. That means I need serious advice.
VodkaWaka ( talk) 05:00, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I have already added the citation in the footnotes then why my draft is declined again. I want to know the real reason for rejection. Kindly help me as i want to correct my draft Lerocque.
Mahul sharma ( talk) 06:49, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
The reviewer said that the article seems to be a news report of a single event and may not be notable enough for an article. It is true that the article emphasizes the Brussels airport terror attack in 2016 as Nidhi (the article is about her) rose to prominence as a survivor of the attack. Post that, she has been a well-known leader of the employees agitation to revive the now defunct Jet Airways. She has also published her memoir last months and is currently touring the country launching her book. Therefore, given that she is a well-known person due to the attack, her Jet Airways activism and her book (along with multiple awards and talks), we would like to further emphasize the fact that the article is about Nidhi and her journey and not only about the terror attack although that is prominently mentioned in the article. Kindly do review the article and let us know if we can make certain edits which would allow the article to become notable enough for publication on Wikipedia. Thank you so very much! :) Samantakbhadra ( talk) 09:31, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Hello there,
I am requesting assistance to discuss the decline of the submission. My Wikipedia submission was based on another laundry company that is published here. This is the page: /info/en/?search=Pressto
I believe my referencing was stronger than theirs, because mine proves that "Laundry by time signature" was awarded by ISEA for being the best Laundry Service. In my understanding, anybody given prestigious awards that prove the quality of their services to be at the forefront of their industry is notable enough but I might be wrong. Can you please help me point out what might be lacking from my end?
Thank you for the support, I admire every volunteer for their service. I\
Nayabks (
talk)
09:43, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I read the articles and understand your points. So I'll forget the Pressto page. As per the Notability of a company or organization, I do understand now exactly what is required. I had mistakenly tagged the wrong ISEA page, I was able to find an article that will fulfill the requirement: here's the award being independently covered by a top Nigerian news source:
https://www.thisdaylive.com/index.php/2019/04/16/laundrybytimesignature-others-win-award/
This Day has a wikipedia page too. If I edit this source into the article and change the ISEA part, will this page be good to come alive?
Thank you!
P.S. this is the ISEA page: https://www.iso.org/iso-awards.html these are called international standard excellence awards
Nayabks ( talk) 08:51, 15 February 2020 (UTC)
Hello Wikipedians!
I'm requesting help because I want to understand the objections on my draft so that I can effectively work on improving the draft. There are 2 main objections:
What I'm unable to understand about the verifiability of a reference is, what determines if the website is seen as a good 3rd party source? Because I have posted news sites like "Market watch" as one of the references but even those didn't pass. On top of that, some of the top Indian entrepreneur news sites were also declined, such as: "Silicon India".
I am neutral about the topic and had written from a neutral point of view. But I don't see what went wrong. If it's possible to get highlights of that, that will be very helpful, if not, how can I find an editor who will be willing to improve my writing?
Lastly, I have 9 more articles that were recently uploaded about this entrepreneur. Can you check the list and let me know if any of these websites are considered credible enough?
http://www.globestats.com/meet-romy-johnson-who-made-3-5-crores-in-a-year-being-an-edtech-entrepreneur/ http://www.vernamagazine.com/2020/02/08/brilliant-entrepreneur-romy-johnson-is-helping-thousands-to-study-abroad/ http://www.fabworldtoday.com/the-incredible-success-of-the-21-year-old-entrepreneur-romy-johnson-turns-into-a-sensation-in-the-business-community/ http://www.openthenews.com/romy-johnson-youngest-indian-edtech-millionaire-entrepreneur-speaks-for-the-first-time/ http://www.usaherald.online/romy-johnson-from-a-college-student-to-successful-edtech-entrepreneur/ http://www.featureweekly.com/amazing-success-of-romy-johnson-catches-edtech-industry-by-surprise/ http://www.broadcastcover.com/simple-edtech-businesses-earn-romy-johnson-3-5-crores-in-a-year/ http://www.ustimesnow.com/romy-johnson-indias-talented-self-made-edtech-entrepreneur/ http://www.allnewsbuzz.com/want-to-be-a-millionaire-learn-from-romy-johnson-who-made-it-as-a-successful-edtech-entrepreneur/
Thank you for your help, I admire and respect the service that every volunteer adds to the platform and makes it possible to be maintained. Cheers!
Nayabks ( talk) 09:59, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Added extra references to various websites. Updated information with latest band information.
DoeEyed (
talk)
10:46, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I'm looking for guidance in terms of setting up the OakNorth page. I'm an employer at the company but i've been careful to follow guidelines provided in terms of ensuring the entry is fully factual and that all key points are linked / referenced with multiple impartial sources.
Please do let me know if you're able to help.
thank you
TomPaveySmith ( talk) 10:55, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I don't care to put work into this. If somebody else wants to fix it they can. Updating this info was harder than I thought it would be.
Nickkane8 ( talk) 11:26, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Redokcart (
talk)
11:33, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Hi, This page was created taking reference from the page of Jeremy Stoppelman. Could you please re-look at it and guide on how can it be improved. The references provided includes Forbes, Reuters, Yahoo Finance and Buzzfeed. Any help would be appreciated. Thanking you. 47.23.95.170 ( talk) 14:59, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
1. http://www.openthenews.com/how-victor-smushkevich-cracked-search-engine-optimization/
3. https://www.forbes.com/sites/forbesagencycouncil/people/victorsmushkevich/#e22710c79717
4. https://in.news.yahoo.com/victor-smushkevich-built-7-figure-195259873.html
8. https://www.openthenews.com/how-victor-smushkevich-cracked-search-engine-optimization/
9. https://techbullion.com/how-victor-smushkevich-built-a-7-figure-business-without-finishing-college/
The content is based on the press release on ISO TC292 online website, but I wrote that press release and have permission to include it for the wikipedia page. Plus the information has been modified and restructured but some wording has to remain the same as it is referring to the content of a published standard so you don't want to change the wording too much
Bank.jeanne ( talk) 20:40, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Bapsyata (
talk)
21:11, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
multiple authentic sources have been added as the reference for the support of my article on Hi-Care Group Mahadi H ( talk) 22:49, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
I have added the full discography of the artist to the page, to prove the work of the artist. Catture ( talk) 23:14, 12 February 2020 (UTC)