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Hi,
Thanks for your help on finding neutral tone. I have made as many changes as I can find that might lean to one direction or another without credible sources--a few changes since the recent decline. I want to get your advice before going through the submission process again. Is there anything specific I can do on this article that would remove any "promotional" tone? Do I need to go into detail about his company's bankruptcy to show more of the negative? In my research, it seems like he used to have a wikipedia page, but it was under his former name, and then was deleted by an editor whose account was deleted as a sock puppet.
I appreciate your feedback in advance and hope to become a better writer!
thank you :)
HeatherRBI (
talk)
00:03, 6 July 2017 (UTC)HeatherRBI
I was told, that this is not an adoption site. That was the same note as earlier, and I specified, the animal, in this case Kip Dynamite the hairless guinea pig, is not up for adoption.
Nickevgeniou ( talk) 03:29, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
I want this draft to become an article soon. Please help.
BugMenn (
talk)
05:18, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
I have added alot of resources and improved the article I am still not clear upon the claims that had the article declined at the first place. What is the essence of promotionalism that the reviewer talked about? I have checked through the sources and they are not press releases and published with reputed newspapers and journals. What is the criteria to consider something as "Press Release"?
Why was the article declined in the English Wikipedia? I translated and improved the German entry. Divanova ( talk) 10:32, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
Thank you! :-)
Hi, I have created an article in relation to the name Timmins. There is already an article with this title that refers to the City of Timmins in Ontario Canada, the founder of the city had the surname Timmins. Also there is an article title "Timmins (surname)" which seems to be just a list of people with the surname of Timmins. Due to existing Wikipedia entries I am seeking advice on what the title of my article should be called?
Thanks, Tony Timmins
Tonytea51 ( talk) 15:17, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
I have provided adequate reliable references for the above subjects notability. A person who saved people during riots, built a blood bank to serve humanity etc. has earned notability in my view although I tried providing relevant references. But still I found some newspaper cut outs on https://tajallieshahabblog.wordpress.com/in-news/ and I tried finding the archive of those relevant news articles on respective news paper website but that are not available but these news paper cut outs are available on the above mentioned website but I am not sure if that can be cited as a reference? your kind help will be highly appreciated. Thanks Ubaid1salfi ( talk) 16:21, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
Can comeone please look at the article I'm working on in my sandbox /info/en/?search=User:Newfocusnow/sandbox Please bare with me while I explain as to why Im seeking help due to the subjects name is protected by an admin already. The admin whom protected the name did act in good faith as you can see the logs state it is spam, 'promo, ETC. Which has all been cleared via Wikipedia invesgations that the subject (kris degioia) was not apart of any of the actions listed in the logs. It's quite appernt that many people including now myself has tried to many an afc have found her more then noteable but also her references are legit. Also to note she defended herself at one for having it removed to begin with. What no one else can understand also is why the main page for her from 5 years ago was not only taken down but also there are no logs of that page... only the ones after her cyberstalking Case ended keeps getting pulled down, but yet there's no trace of the one from five years prior nor the reason it was removed.. If anything now she has more credibility now then the first one that created 5 years ago and deleted 13 months ago. The fact that it was up for that long with no disputes what so ever and then poof deleted raises many more questions and concerns. From an outsider looking in seems as if someone is attempting to do everything in his or her power (by looking at the logs) to make sure she does not have a Wikipedia page. The reasons for that are not clear as it's rejected due to many fake accounts, that are using the wrong references point back to the afc from 11 months ago, not 5 years ago. For sanities sake I will keep these questions regarding why I'm here to many ones that have been deleted recently. (1) to date she was the youngest senior vp at google.( 2) Also to date she is the victim of one of biggest federal stalking Case in history. That is not an opinion it is a fact. (3) she is the ceo of a global marketing firm for over 3 years. (4) she is listed as an influencer on every social platform in existence. Along with being listed in Forbes twice, entrepreneur magazine, holds 6 AVA awards, 9 socckie awards (no not sockpuppet awards) but socckies, and many other awards. Also she has been interviewed on Several reputable talk shows and radio shows. (5) she actually formed a foundation (with celebrity mykle hawke), and attorney Alexis moore, whom is also as known cyberstalking victim, author and advocate, to help of vitctims cyberbullying, stalking and bullying in general. (5) her foundation CSI Awareness is one of the only foundations in this nature that does not just offer emotional support, but actually developed 5 different types of software that enables them to know exactly who the perp is. (6) that same software she took infront of senate to be approved for law enforcement to hthat is used by law enforcement to use. (7) at that very same senate hearing she spoke right after Ashton Kutcher for thorn software (7) with csi software combined with thorns she has been able to help thorn in 3 sex traffic cases she is cited in national cases (8) she re wrote the entire syllubs on Digital marketing for 3 colleges. The list goes on and on. I can not wrap my brain around why no one cared to point out these facts, and noted them as promotional or spam. How in the world is any of that promotional or spam??? also as to why no one else finds it beyond noteable or honorable. If any of the volunteers here at Wikipedia has their child being bullied and had exhausted all efforts with law enforcement or the schools who would you go to? Where would you find resources for up to date help? Answer wouldn be: Kris degioia and her foundation. and so is also listed under the definition on Wikipedia for cyberstalking and cyberbullying. With all of that said, and the links to back it up how is she not even listed as an advocate on here? And how is any of that promotional? Any part of that not give her the credit she deserves? Because a lot of people have to tried to make a page under her name, over the past year alone and they are poorley written? Because one of those people who made a page after her trial was listed as a sock puppet, even though she had nothing to do with it and it'd been proven by Wikipedia she never paid anyone? Or is it the saying "the more you speak the truth the most people will try to discredit you, and shut you down" true? I am a journalist that is always seeking the truth and while writing an arictle on cyberstalking I came here to Wikipedia and needless to say was in shock at all I found regarding Kris Degioia. I am in no way shape or form affiliated with her or her foundation, the paper I write for has written many articles on her (for full disclosure) I do not want to be marked as spam or banned like the others for writing her page, as I did not come here for that reason I only found it as a journalist to point out all the facts and write article I saw all of the logs. I am sorry If this seems like a rant as that was not my intention
Newfocusnow ( talk) 16:23, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
Updater500 ( talk) 22:56, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
How do I link the photo that I uploaded to this article?
Thanks,
How many links are required within in an article? I'm just wondering if my page will need more links or if the amount that I have is enough. Nmmoore ( talk) 22:58, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
How were you able to add a hyperlink on to the article titles. Every time i try the resources turn blue and i cannot make any edits to them.
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Hi,
Thanks for your help on finding neutral tone. I have made as many changes as I can find that might lean to one direction or another without credible sources--a few changes since the recent decline. I want to get your advice before going through the submission process again. Is there anything specific I can do on this article that would remove any "promotional" tone? Do I need to go into detail about his company's bankruptcy to show more of the negative? In my research, it seems like he used to have a wikipedia page, but it was under his former name, and then was deleted by an editor whose account was deleted as a sock puppet.
I appreciate your feedback in advance and hope to become a better writer!
thank you :)
HeatherRBI (
talk)
00:03, 6 July 2017 (UTC)HeatherRBI
I was told, that this is not an adoption site. That was the same note as earlier, and I specified, the animal, in this case Kip Dynamite the hairless guinea pig, is not up for adoption.
Nickevgeniou ( talk) 03:29, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
I want this draft to become an article soon. Please help.
BugMenn (
talk)
05:18, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
I have added alot of resources and improved the article I am still not clear upon the claims that had the article declined at the first place. What is the essence of promotionalism that the reviewer talked about? I have checked through the sources and they are not press releases and published with reputed newspapers and journals. What is the criteria to consider something as "Press Release"?
Why was the article declined in the English Wikipedia? I translated and improved the German entry. Divanova ( talk) 10:32, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
Thank you! :-)
Hi, I have created an article in relation to the name Timmins. There is already an article with this title that refers to the City of Timmins in Ontario Canada, the founder of the city had the surname Timmins. Also there is an article title "Timmins (surname)" which seems to be just a list of people with the surname of Timmins. Due to existing Wikipedia entries I am seeking advice on what the title of my article should be called?
Thanks, Tony Timmins
Tonytea51 ( talk) 15:17, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
I have provided adequate reliable references for the above subjects notability. A person who saved people during riots, built a blood bank to serve humanity etc. has earned notability in my view although I tried providing relevant references. But still I found some newspaper cut outs on https://tajallieshahabblog.wordpress.com/in-news/ and I tried finding the archive of those relevant news articles on respective news paper website but that are not available but these news paper cut outs are available on the above mentioned website but I am not sure if that can be cited as a reference? your kind help will be highly appreciated. Thanks Ubaid1salfi ( talk) 16:21, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
Can comeone please look at the article I'm working on in my sandbox /info/en/?search=User:Newfocusnow/sandbox Please bare with me while I explain as to why Im seeking help due to the subjects name is protected by an admin already. The admin whom protected the name did act in good faith as you can see the logs state it is spam, 'promo, ETC. Which has all been cleared via Wikipedia invesgations that the subject (kris degioia) was not apart of any of the actions listed in the logs. It's quite appernt that many people including now myself has tried to many an afc have found her more then noteable but also her references are legit. Also to note she defended herself at one for having it removed to begin with. What no one else can understand also is why the main page for her from 5 years ago was not only taken down but also there are no logs of that page... only the ones after her cyberstalking Case ended keeps getting pulled down, but yet there's no trace of the one from five years prior nor the reason it was removed.. If anything now she has more credibility now then the first one that created 5 years ago and deleted 13 months ago. The fact that it was up for that long with no disputes what so ever and then poof deleted raises many more questions and concerns. From an outsider looking in seems as if someone is attempting to do everything in his or her power (by looking at the logs) to make sure she does not have a Wikipedia page. The reasons for that are not clear as it's rejected due to many fake accounts, that are using the wrong references point back to the afc from 11 months ago, not 5 years ago. For sanities sake I will keep these questions regarding why I'm here to many ones that have been deleted recently. (1) to date she was the youngest senior vp at google.( 2) Also to date she is the victim of one of biggest federal stalking Case in history. That is not an opinion it is a fact. (3) she is the ceo of a global marketing firm for over 3 years. (4) she is listed as an influencer on every social platform in existence. Along with being listed in Forbes twice, entrepreneur magazine, holds 6 AVA awards, 9 socckie awards (no not sockpuppet awards) but socckies, and many other awards. Also she has been interviewed on Several reputable talk shows and radio shows. (5) she actually formed a foundation (with celebrity mykle hawke), and attorney Alexis moore, whom is also as known cyberstalking victim, author and advocate, to help of vitctims cyberbullying, stalking and bullying in general. (5) her foundation CSI Awareness is one of the only foundations in this nature that does not just offer emotional support, but actually developed 5 different types of software that enables them to know exactly who the perp is. (6) that same software she took infront of senate to be approved for law enforcement to hthat is used by law enforcement to use. (7) at that very same senate hearing she spoke right after Ashton Kutcher for thorn software (7) with csi software combined with thorns she has been able to help thorn in 3 sex traffic cases she is cited in national cases (8) she re wrote the entire syllubs on Digital marketing for 3 colleges. The list goes on and on. I can not wrap my brain around why no one cared to point out these facts, and noted them as promotional or spam. How in the world is any of that promotional or spam??? also as to why no one else finds it beyond noteable or honorable. If any of the volunteers here at Wikipedia has their child being bullied and had exhausted all efforts with law enforcement or the schools who would you go to? Where would you find resources for up to date help? Answer wouldn be: Kris degioia and her foundation. and so is also listed under the definition on Wikipedia for cyberstalking and cyberbullying. With all of that said, and the links to back it up how is she not even listed as an advocate on here? And how is any of that promotional? Any part of that not give her the credit she deserves? Because a lot of people have to tried to make a page under her name, over the past year alone and they are poorley written? Because one of those people who made a page after her trial was listed as a sock puppet, even though she had nothing to do with it and it'd been proven by Wikipedia she never paid anyone? Or is it the saying "the more you speak the truth the most people will try to discredit you, and shut you down" true? I am a journalist that is always seeking the truth and while writing an arictle on cyberstalking I came here to Wikipedia and needless to say was in shock at all I found regarding Kris Degioia. I am in no way shape or form affiliated with her or her foundation, the paper I write for has written many articles on her (for full disclosure) I do not want to be marked as spam or banned like the others for writing her page, as I did not come here for that reason I only found it as a journalist to point out all the facts and write article I saw all of the logs. I am sorry If this seems like a rant as that was not my intention
Newfocusnow ( talk) 16:23, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
Updater500 ( talk) 22:56, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
How do I link the photo that I uploaded to this article?
Thanks,
How many links are required within in an article? I'm just wondering if my page will need more links or if the amount that I have is enough. Nmmoore ( talk) 22:58, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
How were you able to add a hyperlink on to the article titles. Every time i try the resources turn blue and i cannot make any edits to them.