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Wondering what i need specifically to improve this article....do i need more sources, or do i need to prove that the new lead singer of a major American band is noteworthy? New to doing this, and need guidance.
thanks Hoovbacca ( talk) 00:22, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
I wrote an article about a company but it was refused. They said i didnt have adequate references and that it was ambiguous advertising. There is little informaton about the company online. It is a startup. So finding references is extremely difficult, actually there are none. How can i handle this? and about the ambiguous advertising what does that mean?
Here is the post below. Please help me understand where i went wrong.
DATA FINTECH is a Consumer Data Broker located in Nairobi (Kenya) whose main aim is to generate financial value from a consumer database. Every company has a database of clients and this data asset has a financial value. Data Fintech believes in using this data to help create financial value, increase customer database, influence customer decisions and predict customer behavior. Contents • 1.History o 1.1 Founders • 2 .Services • 3. Company culture • 4. Major work • 7. References • 9. External links History Foundation Founded in 2015, the company provides an innovative business model to monetize databases, and has partners (i.e. data provider) in several sectors in Africa and outside Africa. Founders The organization was founded by Dramane Traore and Donatien Beguv. Dramane Traore is an e-Payments Expert with 15 years experience in the FINTECH Industry in France, Canada and Africa. He has been in charge of the business development in Sub-Saharan Africa at FIS Global (NYSE: FIS). Dramane holds a Master from ESCG Business School in Paris. Donatien Beguv is a Data Analysis Expert with 11 years experience in African Economics, Demographics and Health data analysis. Donatien is the Head of the Statistics and Surveys in a leading NGO in Nairobi. Donatien holds a PhD from Paris 10 University, in France. Services Data Fintech's services and products are targeting online market places, bancassurance business, retail business and informal economy. The company's business model is to collect and analyze data from organizations to create a new content that include scoring, trend analytics and recommendations. The new content is then sold to third parties and the new revenue shared between the organization (i.e. data owner) and Data Fintech. Company Culture Data Fintech believes in creating an affordable data-driven ecosystem to help businesses make strategic decisions. The organization uses the phrase " Smart business=Smart data." Within the organization, it encourages employees to shift from data producers to data consumers. Major Works Kenya Electronic Brands Competition Report Data Fintech gives a comprehensive monthly report on the performance of electronic brands such as Apple, Samsung, Infinix, LG, HTC, TLC, Sony, Lenovo, in the Kenyan market. The data is collected fromPigiame.co.ke, the largest online classified marketplace for electronic items in Kenya Informal Small Business. The company has engaged in various social entrepreneurship projects. The biggest being a service that aims to help informal small business owners to access finance, by tracking their economic activities. In 2016 The Company undertook a survey that looked at over 200 small business owners in 10 major slums around Nairobi. From this, Data Fintech found out that one of the major issues informal small businesses have is the inaccessibility to finance. This encumbered their ability to grow their businesses. The reason they did not have access to finance was because of poor credit scoring or the lack of. As such Data Fintech came up with a way to help these businesses. The company developed a mobile app that allowed business owners to keep track of their financial activities. This also gave Data Fintech access to the data, allowing them to score various businesses. Through a partnership with a bank, over 200 informal small business owners now have access to finance.
Edna Maritim (
talk)
12:45, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
Dear help desk,
Is it normal to have an article under review since 2016 Dec 26?
My response to the previous reviewers: see article talk page
Toux ( talk) 12:46, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
Quint Buchholz is a notable person. There is an article about him on the German Wikipedia. He is also referenced in two other English Wikipedia articles, including "Mildred L. Batchelder Award" and "Talk Amongst Trees". He received two Batchelder Awards (1998, 2000). He has also been listed author of one of the Best Illustrated Children's Books 1999 by the New York Times and has been reviewed for the NY Times by the critic Perry Nodelman. Another book, Nero Corleone by Elke Heidenreich and illustrated by Quint Buchholz was also recommended by the NY Times. Numerous websites have reviewed books written by him and illustrated by him (e.g.
https://www.kirkusreviews.com/book-reviews/quint-buchholz/the-collector-of-moments/;
http://www.publishersweekly.com/978-0-374-31520-7).
NY Times best illustrated children's books 1999:
http://www.nytimes.com/1999/11/21/books/children-s-books-the-best-illustrated-children-s-books-1999.html
NY Times children's Bookshelf recommendation:
http://www.nytimes.com/1998/01/18/books/children-s-books-bookshelf-999938.html
Review of Quint Buchholz's work published by the Goethe Institute:
http://www.goethe.de/ins/es/mad/prj/kuj/en9846597.htm
Review by Perry Nodelman for the NY Times:
http://www.nytimes.com/books/99/11/21/reviews/991121.21nodelmt.html
My article was denied, it says I need to insert proof that the person I'm writing about is a notable person. But where in my article should I insert the sources that prove that? Quibu ( talk) 16:08, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
DavidPatBoyle ( talk) 20:15, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
20:15:57, 20 January 2017 review of submission by DavidPatBoyle
I am new. How do I make the blue print for words that are in another Wikipedia Article? I have a new article with lots of possibilities. DavidPatBoyle ( talk) 20:15, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
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Wondering what i need specifically to improve this article....do i need more sources, or do i need to prove that the new lead singer of a major American band is noteworthy? New to doing this, and need guidance.
thanks Hoovbacca ( talk) 00:22, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
I wrote an article about a company but it was refused. They said i didnt have adequate references and that it was ambiguous advertising. There is little informaton about the company online. It is a startup. So finding references is extremely difficult, actually there are none. How can i handle this? and about the ambiguous advertising what does that mean?
Here is the post below. Please help me understand where i went wrong.
DATA FINTECH is a Consumer Data Broker located in Nairobi (Kenya) whose main aim is to generate financial value from a consumer database. Every company has a database of clients and this data asset has a financial value. Data Fintech believes in using this data to help create financial value, increase customer database, influence customer decisions and predict customer behavior. Contents • 1.History o 1.1 Founders • 2 .Services • 3. Company culture • 4. Major work • 7. References • 9. External links History Foundation Founded in 2015, the company provides an innovative business model to monetize databases, and has partners (i.e. data provider) in several sectors in Africa and outside Africa. Founders The organization was founded by Dramane Traore and Donatien Beguv. Dramane Traore is an e-Payments Expert with 15 years experience in the FINTECH Industry in France, Canada and Africa. He has been in charge of the business development in Sub-Saharan Africa at FIS Global (NYSE: FIS). Dramane holds a Master from ESCG Business School in Paris. Donatien Beguv is a Data Analysis Expert with 11 years experience in African Economics, Demographics and Health data analysis. Donatien is the Head of the Statistics and Surveys in a leading NGO in Nairobi. Donatien holds a PhD from Paris 10 University, in France. Services Data Fintech's services and products are targeting online market places, bancassurance business, retail business and informal economy. The company's business model is to collect and analyze data from organizations to create a new content that include scoring, trend analytics and recommendations. The new content is then sold to third parties and the new revenue shared between the organization (i.e. data owner) and Data Fintech. Company Culture Data Fintech believes in creating an affordable data-driven ecosystem to help businesses make strategic decisions. The organization uses the phrase " Smart business=Smart data." Within the organization, it encourages employees to shift from data producers to data consumers. Major Works Kenya Electronic Brands Competition Report Data Fintech gives a comprehensive monthly report on the performance of electronic brands such as Apple, Samsung, Infinix, LG, HTC, TLC, Sony, Lenovo, in the Kenyan market. The data is collected fromPigiame.co.ke, the largest online classified marketplace for electronic items in Kenya Informal Small Business. The company has engaged in various social entrepreneurship projects. The biggest being a service that aims to help informal small business owners to access finance, by tracking their economic activities. In 2016 The Company undertook a survey that looked at over 200 small business owners in 10 major slums around Nairobi. From this, Data Fintech found out that one of the major issues informal small businesses have is the inaccessibility to finance. This encumbered their ability to grow their businesses. The reason they did not have access to finance was because of poor credit scoring or the lack of. As such Data Fintech came up with a way to help these businesses. The company developed a mobile app that allowed business owners to keep track of their financial activities. This also gave Data Fintech access to the data, allowing them to score various businesses. Through a partnership with a bank, over 200 informal small business owners now have access to finance.
Edna Maritim (
talk)
12:45, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
Dear help desk,
Is it normal to have an article under review since 2016 Dec 26?
My response to the previous reviewers: see article talk page
Toux ( talk) 12:46, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
Quint Buchholz is a notable person. There is an article about him on the German Wikipedia. He is also referenced in two other English Wikipedia articles, including "Mildred L. Batchelder Award" and "Talk Amongst Trees". He received two Batchelder Awards (1998, 2000). He has also been listed author of one of the Best Illustrated Children's Books 1999 by the New York Times and has been reviewed for the NY Times by the critic Perry Nodelman. Another book, Nero Corleone by Elke Heidenreich and illustrated by Quint Buchholz was also recommended by the NY Times. Numerous websites have reviewed books written by him and illustrated by him (e.g.
https://www.kirkusreviews.com/book-reviews/quint-buchholz/the-collector-of-moments/;
http://www.publishersweekly.com/978-0-374-31520-7).
NY Times best illustrated children's books 1999:
http://www.nytimes.com/1999/11/21/books/children-s-books-the-best-illustrated-children-s-books-1999.html
NY Times children's Bookshelf recommendation:
http://www.nytimes.com/1998/01/18/books/children-s-books-bookshelf-999938.html
Review of Quint Buchholz's work published by the Goethe Institute:
http://www.goethe.de/ins/es/mad/prj/kuj/en9846597.htm
Review by Perry Nodelman for the NY Times:
http://www.nytimes.com/books/99/11/21/reviews/991121.21nodelmt.html
My article was denied, it says I need to insert proof that the person I'm writing about is a notable person. But where in my article should I insert the sources that prove that? Quibu ( talk) 16:08, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
DavidPatBoyle ( talk) 20:15, 20 January 2017 (UTC)
20:15:57, 20 January 2017 review of submission by DavidPatBoyle
I am new. How do I make the blue print for words that are in another Wikipedia Article? I have a new article with lots of possibilities. DavidPatBoyle ( talk) 20:15, 20 January 2017 (UTC)