Please review my article Max Dashu. Thanks.
Dante8 ( talk) 01:09, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
A New Article about the Golden State Pops Orchestra, a professional orchestra in Southern California.
Pshenning ( talk) 01:16, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
I tried my best on this so let me know if it's bad
16falloutboy (
talk)
03:26, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
St. John's Greek Orthodox College is a co-educational school established in 1979 [6] and is part of the Independent School sector. The College was founded to provide education of Greek culutre and religion to the 1st 2nd and 3rd generations of Greeks who lived in Melbourne.
Stjgoc ( talk) 04:08, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
i am trying to add my name to Wikipedia so that it may be searched, i would like some assistance making it as complete as possible and would love to have some help or suggestions. the page that i have started says my user name before the page im not sure if this is just while its being edited or if it will stay that way..
i guess you can message me on here if you have any info that will help.
thank you in advance )
Brianallard78 ( talk) 04:52, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
This is the first article I have created. Right now, I want to know what I should do to improve the article. Any advice and comments would also be helpful. Thanks!
KeeperOfTheInformation (
talk)
05:07, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
this article are made by the author of this website : http://www.fabfamilyfoundation.com. all the sources like article and picture are valid. 180.253.225.148 ( talk) 10:56, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
This page is about a business providing adaptive optics for science industry and medicine. The page contains a link to a substantial list of publications based on our products. We would like to see the page in the category of optical manufacturing companies.
Gleb@okotech.com ( talk) 12:12, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
This is my first article on Wikipedia. It's about an historic printing company in Northumberland. I would be grateful for constructive feedback about how I can make the article any more informative and publishable. Many thanks!
Laurie Cansfield ( talk) 16:26, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
This is the first article I have written for Wikipedia so would appreciate any comments. I have moved it into mainspace but do not regard it as finished. It needs rounding out and the addition of one or more photographs. The article is focussed on those aspects of the subject's work where independent online references can most readily be sourced.
Finiwiki (
talk)
17:52, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Universal Lighting Technologies, Inc. - can someone please review my new article?
Corwil ( talk) 17:57, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
I have written this article and tried to reference it from the relevant obituaries which provided the content, facts and inspiration of the piece. Please can someone check it is sufficiently referenced, I am obviously conscious not to breach any copyright laws. Any help and feedback would be much appreciated. Thank you.
Thanks very much-that looks a lot better. help much appreciated.
The Walled City ( talk) 20:38, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Good Afternoon Editors,
I tried using your tool http://toolserver.org/~dispenser/cgi-bin/webreflinks.py?page=DynaVenture&citeweb=checked to check the url's used in my article on DynaVenture.
It said: Applying English Wikipedia fixes No changes necessary: references template found. No changes were necessary in DynaVenture
If there is any specific feedback or changes I need to make please let me know. I referenced according to APA style guidelines. Link rot is a new term to me though so advice is welcomed to prevent it.
Advance thanks for your help.
Suzy Huber ( talk) 20:40, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
New article. Piazza is an online Q&A platform designed for classes.
Tberbert ( talk) 20:50, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
I'm having trouble placing .jpg photographs into this page. Can anyone please help? Thank you!
Jeffrey Gusfield ( talk) 20:55, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Just general feedback on how to improve the article.
Thesocialistguy (
talk)
21:44, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Edgetherapeutics ( talk) 23:23, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Is this person worth a page? He was popular at SIGMOD this year.
Rahul6301 ( talk) 01:24, 28 June 2011 (UTC)
Please review my article Max Dashu. Thanks.
Dante8 ( talk) 01:09, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
A New Article about the Golden State Pops Orchestra, a professional orchestra in Southern California.
Pshenning ( talk) 01:16, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
I tried my best on this so let me know if it's bad
16falloutboy (
talk)
03:26, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
St. John's Greek Orthodox College is a co-educational school established in 1979 [6] and is part of the Independent School sector. The College was founded to provide education of Greek culutre and religion to the 1st 2nd and 3rd generations of Greeks who lived in Melbourne.
Stjgoc ( talk) 04:08, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
i am trying to add my name to Wikipedia so that it may be searched, i would like some assistance making it as complete as possible and would love to have some help or suggestions. the page that i have started says my user name before the page im not sure if this is just while its being edited or if it will stay that way..
i guess you can message me on here if you have any info that will help.
thank you in advance )
Brianallard78 ( talk) 04:52, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
This is the first article I have created. Right now, I want to know what I should do to improve the article. Any advice and comments would also be helpful. Thanks!
KeeperOfTheInformation (
talk)
05:07, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
this article are made by the author of this website : http://www.fabfamilyfoundation.com. all the sources like article and picture are valid. 180.253.225.148 ( talk) 10:56, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
This page is about a business providing adaptive optics for science industry and medicine. The page contains a link to a substantial list of publications based on our products. We would like to see the page in the category of optical manufacturing companies.
Gleb@okotech.com ( talk) 12:12, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
This is my first article on Wikipedia. It's about an historic printing company in Northumberland. I would be grateful for constructive feedback about how I can make the article any more informative and publishable. Many thanks!
Laurie Cansfield ( talk) 16:26, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
This is the first article I have written for Wikipedia so would appreciate any comments. I have moved it into mainspace but do not regard it as finished. It needs rounding out and the addition of one or more photographs. The article is focussed on those aspects of the subject's work where independent online references can most readily be sourced.
Finiwiki (
talk)
17:52, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Universal Lighting Technologies, Inc. - can someone please review my new article?
Corwil ( talk) 17:57, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
I have written this article and tried to reference it from the relevant obituaries which provided the content, facts and inspiration of the piece. Please can someone check it is sufficiently referenced, I am obviously conscious not to breach any copyright laws. Any help and feedback would be much appreciated. Thank you.
Thanks very much-that looks a lot better. help much appreciated.
The Walled City ( talk) 20:38, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Good Afternoon Editors,
I tried using your tool http://toolserver.org/~dispenser/cgi-bin/webreflinks.py?page=DynaVenture&citeweb=checked to check the url's used in my article on DynaVenture.
It said: Applying English Wikipedia fixes No changes necessary: references template found. No changes were necessary in DynaVenture
If there is any specific feedback or changes I need to make please let me know. I referenced according to APA style guidelines. Link rot is a new term to me though so advice is welcomed to prevent it.
Advance thanks for your help.
Suzy Huber ( talk) 20:40, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
New article. Piazza is an online Q&A platform designed for classes.
Tberbert ( talk) 20:50, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
I'm having trouble placing .jpg photographs into this page. Can anyone please help? Thank you!
Jeffrey Gusfield ( talk) 20:55, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Just general feedback on how to improve the article.
Thesocialistguy (
talk)
21:44, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Edgetherapeutics ( talk) 23:23, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Is this person worth a page? He was popular at SIGMOD this year.
Rahul6301 ( talk) 01:24, 28 June 2011 (UTC)