Please review and comment on this article. I recently met one of the band member of The Young Man in a business function and was intrigued by the short history of this interesting Hong Kong band.
Hope that Wiki can publish it and perhaps more people from Hong Kong can contribute.
Thanks.
Dragon0418 (
talk)
02:41, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
Please review this article and leave any necessary comments or critiques. Thank you for you assistance!
Golden helmet78 ( talk) 02:55, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
Is this good enough for an article stub on Laurence Picken? I hope this will entice other ethnomusicologists to improve the entry.
CambridgeLibrarian (
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10:11, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
Is this good enough?
CambridgeLibrarian ( talk) 12:46, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
Thanks infobox added (I just don't have certain information!), and wikified layout. Hope that looks better to you too. CambridgeLibrarian ( talk) 18:42, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
This is my first Wikipedia article. First draft was rejected with a request to make notability clear. This is the second draft, looking for ideas on for further improvement before I request a move again.
Djmikecrash ( talk) 16:51, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
This band has an empty link from The Decemberists Wikipedia page. My sources are from NPR and Paste Magazine. This is my first article attempt, it's kind of a stub, and I'd like some feedback as well as whether or not the band is notable enough.
Knitgeek (
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17:11, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
Article looks pretty good. I think it is notable enough for inclusion, though not for a huge article. Other bands' side projects (i.e. Fort Minor) have significant Wiki pages as well. Would you mind taking a quick look at my article and removing the tag at the top if you think it's ready to publish? Thanks! //en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walker_Sands_Communications
Thanks for the great feedback! I've done some heavy editing, could you take a look again?
Knitgeek (
talk)
23:19, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
A book about aviation poineer Wallace Scott was published earlier this month. I am working with the author and publisher on this article. The article is based upon the book "WA - The Life Story of Soaring Legend Wally Scott" and uses the book extensively as its reliable source. Thanks in advance for your feedback/comments.
W scottii (
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19:45, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
This article is completed, but it still has the tag at the top noting that someone needs to review the article and remove the tag. Can someone provide feedback and take off the tag if it's sufficient to be published? It's a pretty quick read. Thanks!
Chicago2011 ( talk) 20:18, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
I believe the current version of the first sentence accommodates the concerns of all 3 editors who weighed in. Chris314 ( talk) 00:43, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
Please review and comment on this article. I recently met one of the band member of The Young Man in a business function and was intrigued by the short history of this interesting Hong Kong band.
Hope that Wiki can publish it and perhaps more people from Hong Kong can contribute.
Thanks.
Dragon0418 (
talk)
02:41, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
Please review this article and leave any necessary comments or critiques. Thank you for you assistance!
Golden helmet78 ( talk) 02:55, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
Is this good enough for an article stub on Laurence Picken? I hope this will entice other ethnomusicologists to improve the entry.
CambridgeLibrarian (
talk)
10:11, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
Is this good enough?
CambridgeLibrarian ( talk) 12:46, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
Thanks infobox added (I just don't have certain information!), and wikified layout. Hope that looks better to you too. CambridgeLibrarian ( talk) 18:42, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
This is my first Wikipedia article. First draft was rejected with a request to make notability clear. This is the second draft, looking for ideas on for further improvement before I request a move again.
Djmikecrash ( talk) 16:51, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
This band has an empty link from The Decemberists Wikipedia page. My sources are from NPR and Paste Magazine. This is my first article attempt, it's kind of a stub, and I'd like some feedback as well as whether or not the band is notable enough.
Knitgeek (
talk)
17:11, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
Article looks pretty good. I think it is notable enough for inclusion, though not for a huge article. Other bands' side projects (i.e. Fort Minor) have significant Wiki pages as well. Would you mind taking a quick look at my article and removing the tag at the top if you think it's ready to publish? Thanks! //en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walker_Sands_Communications
Thanks for the great feedback! I've done some heavy editing, could you take a look again?
Knitgeek (
talk)
23:19, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
A book about aviation poineer Wallace Scott was published earlier this month. I am working with the author and publisher on this article. The article is based upon the book "WA - The Life Story of Soaring Legend Wally Scott" and uses the book extensively as its reliable source. Thanks in advance for your feedback/comments.
W scottii (
talk)
19:45, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
This article is completed, but it still has the tag at the top noting that someone needs to review the article and remove the tag. Can someone provide feedback and take off the tag if it's sufficient to be published? It's a pretty quick read. Thanks!
Chicago2011 ( talk) 20:18, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
I believe the current version of the first sentence accommodates the concerns of all 3 editors who weighed in. Chris314 ( talk) 00:43, 20 February 2011 (UTC)