Alagazbud ( talk) 00:23, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
this is my first page, I would like general feedback. And I would like to know how if the Benjamin Trumbull book is referenced correctly. It is reference 4 - should it be in "Bibliography" or in "references"? It is online at google books but I cannot figure how to get a link to it.
Secantline ( talk) 01:41, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello, any feedback would be appreciated. Thank you..
Nbjaycees (
talk)
02:07, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I am new to wikipedia and really want this article to come to fruition. I don't know too much about computers or internet editing, though I have done a significant amount of writing. I think this concept is just hilarious and awesome, and very true. We have one in my city, and the democratic committee in my area. Help! Thanks!
Queenkatiecocoa ( talk) 02:30, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
This is my first article for Wikipedia about jazz vocalist Ronnie Wells and I would appreciate some feedback.Thanks
MiChelliechellie (
talk)
04:44, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
117.205.1.66 ( talk) 06:22, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Pasir Ris Elias Community Club is a network of People's Association. This is a place for residents of Pasir Ris West to gather, networking and participate event organise by People's Association.
Official link is below: http://www.pa.gov.sg/locate-our-centres/details/pasir-ris-elias-community-club-62.html
Leecs1919 (
talk)
09:44, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Please help me update this page with more information and help me with the Wikipedia formatting. i wish is was as easy to format as MS Word or Blogger. I'm sure Wikipedia would have many more contributors who're now intimidated by code.
Monojoy ( talk) 11:02, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello everyone! I have updated this article and added some references (as had been recommended earlier). I would appreciate if I could receive a feedback on that. Thanks a lot! Proactivesa ( talk) 12:05, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
After the feedback that I got, the article has been cleaned up, more sources added and it has been given categories. Grateful if someone could check out the page. If it is OK, please approve it. I now want to move on to the next one! Thank You for your time and expertise.
Checkcopy ( talk) 12:08, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi there. Please provide feedback to my first article!
I used two printed sources. Have I referenced them correctly?
Thanks!
Mattador79 ( talk) 12:12, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
i gained the chemical's properties from lookchem and have done some work reseaching from other websites please provide the discoverer of the chemical and it's history since i have found contradictory information.
Jasonwithey (
talk)
12:33, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi
I put this article online as a translation of the german wikipdia entry ( http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vienna_International_Hotelmanagement). on german wikipedia it has been online and approved for a while .... hope to achieve the same on the english version :-)
cheers
Vienna International ( talk) 16:01, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Just moved this out of my drafts. Looking for feedback!
108.21.10.133 ( talk) 16:35, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
The Administrative Reforms Commission or ARC is the committee appointed by Government of India for giving recommendations for reviewing the public administration system of India. This request is to review the article as I have added substantial material to try and bring it up to the standard of Wikipedia. Please advise if there are still improvements to be made and whether it is acceptable for the general consumption of the public. abhishek singh 16:42, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I have cleaned up the article grammatically and also edited it for consistency. It reads well. Keep it up.
User:CheckcopyCheckcopy
Please review this, my first article for WP, and provide feedback. The entry provides information on the War of the Rebellion Atlas, a U.S. government publication consisting of maps and other illustrations based on materials generated during the American Civil War. I look forward to constructive, positive feedback.
Wolfsolvesproblems (
talk)
16:53, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I'm seeking feedback on this article I've written about philosopher Wayne Norman. I posted as a sub-page of my user page because I may be in conflict of interest and want feedback before going forward. Thanks!
Ethicsblogger ( talk) 17:29, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Help!
Aamayer73 ( talk) 17:31, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I think I've taken care of the 'orphan' issue. I've added ACP Rail International to this page: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transport_in_Europe in the 'See Also' section. Does this resolve the orphan issue?
Acprail ( talk) 18:21, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
This article has been tagged as being too technical for most readers to understand since 2007. I attempted to fix the problem (see "Revision history of Doubled haploidy" and "Talk:Doubled haploidy"), but could not arrive at a consensus for any course of action that would bring the article up to Wikipedia standards. Any suggestions as to how to proceed would be most appreciated.
Guy Macon 18:23, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Any suggestions on information I should add, or other improvements? Thank you for your time!
REAN (
talk)
18:45, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I am looking for feedback!
Kassidy Paine ( talk) 19:01, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello,
After posting my first article and requesting feedback, I would like to ask an Administrator to please delete my article. I was unaware of the issues with a username being too similar to the topic / article and was advised that this is frowned upon. I would like the opportunity to resubmit via a more appropriate username and after I add some more article references. Thank you for your assistance..
Nbjaycees ( talk) 20:03, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Please give me feedback!!
66.116.13.227 ( talk) 20:50, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hoping to get this published soon - open to any feedback folks have on this.
It's a work in progress (the school, as well as the article), so details are largely gathered from informal sources. Thanks!
WPMuckraker ( talk) 22:22, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I'm new to this. I'd appreciate any feedback.
Hgailm (
talk)
22:37, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Marcus Lyon (born 1965) is a British artist and social entrepreneur. After reading Political Science at Leeds University, Lyon worked as a photographer for Amnesty International in Guatemala. This led to an extensive range of photographic commissions in Latin America, Africa, Asia and North America on social and environmental issues. In 1996 he founded Glassworks an award-winning multi-disciplined art and design business working as an exhibition venue and centre of excellence for original artwork. In 1998 he founded Yard Co. an atelier of art studios and a gallery in central London.
Alagazbud ( talk) 00:23, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
this is my first page, I would like general feedback. And I would like to know how if the Benjamin Trumbull book is referenced correctly. It is reference 4 - should it be in "Bibliography" or in "references"? It is online at google books but I cannot figure how to get a link to it.
Secantline ( talk) 01:41, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello, any feedback would be appreciated. Thank you..
Nbjaycees (
talk)
02:07, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I am new to wikipedia and really want this article to come to fruition. I don't know too much about computers or internet editing, though I have done a significant amount of writing. I think this concept is just hilarious and awesome, and very true. We have one in my city, and the democratic committee in my area. Help! Thanks!
Queenkatiecocoa ( talk) 02:30, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
This is my first article for Wikipedia about jazz vocalist Ronnie Wells and I would appreciate some feedback.Thanks
MiChelliechellie (
talk)
04:44, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
117.205.1.66 ( talk) 06:22, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Pasir Ris Elias Community Club is a network of People's Association. This is a place for residents of Pasir Ris West to gather, networking and participate event organise by People's Association.
Official link is below: http://www.pa.gov.sg/locate-our-centres/details/pasir-ris-elias-community-club-62.html
Leecs1919 (
talk)
09:44, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Please help me update this page with more information and help me with the Wikipedia formatting. i wish is was as easy to format as MS Word or Blogger. I'm sure Wikipedia would have many more contributors who're now intimidated by code.
Monojoy ( talk) 11:02, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello everyone! I have updated this article and added some references (as had been recommended earlier). I would appreciate if I could receive a feedback on that. Thanks a lot! Proactivesa ( talk) 12:05, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
After the feedback that I got, the article has been cleaned up, more sources added and it has been given categories. Grateful if someone could check out the page. If it is OK, please approve it. I now want to move on to the next one! Thank You for your time and expertise.
Checkcopy ( talk) 12:08, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi there. Please provide feedback to my first article!
I used two printed sources. Have I referenced them correctly?
Thanks!
Mattador79 ( talk) 12:12, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
i gained the chemical's properties from lookchem and have done some work reseaching from other websites please provide the discoverer of the chemical and it's history since i have found contradictory information.
Jasonwithey (
talk)
12:33, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi
I put this article online as a translation of the german wikipdia entry ( http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vienna_International_Hotelmanagement). on german wikipedia it has been online and approved for a while .... hope to achieve the same on the english version :-)
cheers
Vienna International ( talk) 16:01, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Just moved this out of my drafts. Looking for feedback!
108.21.10.133 ( talk) 16:35, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
The Administrative Reforms Commission or ARC is the committee appointed by Government of India for giving recommendations for reviewing the public administration system of India. This request is to review the article as I have added substantial material to try and bring it up to the standard of Wikipedia. Please advise if there are still improvements to be made and whether it is acceptable for the general consumption of the public. abhishek singh 16:42, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I have cleaned up the article grammatically and also edited it for consistency. It reads well. Keep it up.
User:CheckcopyCheckcopy
Please review this, my first article for WP, and provide feedback. The entry provides information on the War of the Rebellion Atlas, a U.S. government publication consisting of maps and other illustrations based on materials generated during the American Civil War. I look forward to constructive, positive feedback.
Wolfsolvesproblems (
talk)
16:53, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I'm seeking feedback on this article I've written about philosopher Wayne Norman. I posted as a sub-page of my user page because I may be in conflict of interest and want feedback before going forward. Thanks!
Ethicsblogger ( talk) 17:29, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Help!
Aamayer73 ( talk) 17:31, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I think I've taken care of the 'orphan' issue. I've added ACP Rail International to this page: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transport_in_Europe in the 'See Also' section. Does this resolve the orphan issue?
Acprail ( talk) 18:21, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
This article has been tagged as being too technical for most readers to understand since 2007. I attempted to fix the problem (see "Revision history of Doubled haploidy" and "Talk:Doubled haploidy"), but could not arrive at a consensus for any course of action that would bring the article up to Wikipedia standards. Any suggestions as to how to proceed would be most appreciated.
Guy Macon 18:23, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Any suggestions on information I should add, or other improvements? Thank you for your time!
REAN (
talk)
18:45, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I am looking for feedback!
Kassidy Paine ( talk) 19:01, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello,
After posting my first article and requesting feedback, I would like to ask an Administrator to please delete my article. I was unaware of the issues with a username being too similar to the topic / article and was advised that this is frowned upon. I would like the opportunity to resubmit via a more appropriate username and after I add some more article references. Thank you for your assistance..
Nbjaycees ( talk) 20:03, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Please give me feedback!!
66.116.13.227 ( talk) 20:50, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Hoping to get this published soon - open to any feedback folks have on this.
It's a work in progress (the school, as well as the article), so details are largely gathered from informal sources. Thanks!
WPMuckraker ( talk) 22:22, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
I'm new to this. I'd appreciate any feedback.
Hgailm (
talk)
22:37, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Marcus Lyon (born 1965) is a British artist and social entrepreneur. After reading Political Science at Leeds University, Lyon worked as a photographer for Amnesty International in Guatemala. This led to an extensive range of photographic commissions in Latin America, Africa, Asia and North America on social and environmental issues. In 1996 he founded Glassworks an award-winning multi-disciplined art and design business working as an exhibition venue and centre of excellence for original artwork. In 1998 he founded Yard Co. an atelier of art studios and a gallery in central London.