Hi, I'm just looking for general comments. Thank you, Frank
Franktheatheist (
talk)
03:29, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Best of luck! Chevy monte carlo 17:15, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi, this is my first Wikipedia article and I would really appreciate some feedback. Thank you!
Mcapl ( talk) 04:26, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi, This is my first contribution and i am seeking feedback please Thanks, Jeff
Geez-oz ( talk) 05:03, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Please review this article on TV personality Roleglio Mills and provide me feedback so that it can get out of "unreviewed status"
Iam7 ( talk) 05:25, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
This is my first page from scratch. Looking for some guidance, perhaps on headers. Does everything look ok?
Romkeh (
talk)
06:18, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
The article has been written and ready for publishing
Amk791 ( talk) 08:59, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
My first article called US Security Associates got deleted. can i know the reason behind that? now i created the article under the user profile? how to move this article to public? At what time i can move my article for public ?
Ussa.shini ( talk) 09:20, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Raydev ( talk) 09:22, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
I will copy this to the user talk, as well. Chzz ► 16:56, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
No1shah ( talk) 09:36, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Emd001 ( talk) 11:30, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Please review this brief outline of this accrediting body.
Amybinns (
talk)
13:23, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi Novice7 I can expand the lead a bit but is there something specific that makes it read like an advert? I'm not connected with this organisation and didn't intend this.
I've now expanded the lead and added date accessed to the {{ cite web}} references.
I would like to add pictures, but I can't seem to figure out how.
Would like feedback on my references.
FosterSwift ( talk) 15:25, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Would appreciate someone taking a look at this. I incorporated previous feedback in this version; I'd like to get it live.
Tryout22 ( talk) 16:01, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
...and so on.
Thanks for your feedback, but I believe all those questions are indeed cited in the references -- e.g., the Los Angeles Times obit, the author's own website, etc., all cited at the bottom of the article.
I Have just started my first article and before getting too far down the road wondered if anyone could take a look at it to confirm if the subject is worthy of inclusion. Am still in the process of writing, referenceing etc.
Thanks Bobble2005 ( talk) 16:08, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hoping to get feedback on how to properly expand this article.
Emilytsp ( talk) 17:09, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
This is a page about the comic book character Captain Canada. There is no page on Captain Canada or the Atlantis comic book series. There are links to different websites about him and links to the websites of the companies that own him.
Mikeseriously ( talk) 18:19, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Is this article acceptable? If so what do I do next? thanks
Stuartembury (
talk)
18:59, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
OlafASU ( talk) 19:47, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
How does the article look now? Thanks for the feedback.
FosterSwift (
talk)
19:50, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello,
I initiated a request for feedback the other day, and was told to add additional sources, which I have done. (I now have 5 sources, including a national distribution magazine and a nationally recognized news source from our area--the Independent).
If anyone would like to let me know if this article is ready for publication, or what other steps I must take, I would really appreciate it. My thanks.
Davidstreever ( talk) 20:01, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Would appreciate any feedback on this article, specifically with regard to citations. I'm having issues with formatting on citations.
Ericatoms (
talk)
20:22, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Please review this posting, as this is my first posting, on a company I found quite interesting.
I want to add more to it, like the FCC regulations, the Copyright Law, and how this is turning into quite a heated area for governmental intervention. But I wanted to see if I am on the right track first before volunteering more time.
Timothysmardin (
talk)
21:01, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
How can I add the resource: http://www.telegraph.co.uk/finance/personalfinance/2782339/Ahoy-me-hearties-Nows-a-good-time-to-push-the-boat-out.html to the Wiki page and should it be used?
The company also has Trademarks, both figurative and word. Is this useful relevant information?
This is my first page, any help is greatly appreciated. Didski ( talk) 22:04, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi, I'm just looking for general comments. Thank you, Frank
Franktheatheist (
talk)
03:29, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Best of luck! Chevy monte carlo 17:15, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi, this is my first Wikipedia article and I would really appreciate some feedback. Thank you!
Mcapl ( talk) 04:26, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi, This is my first contribution and i am seeking feedback please Thanks, Jeff
Geez-oz ( talk) 05:03, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Please review this article on TV personality Roleglio Mills and provide me feedback so that it can get out of "unreviewed status"
Iam7 ( talk) 05:25, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
This is my first page from scratch. Looking for some guidance, perhaps on headers. Does everything look ok?
Romkeh (
talk)
06:18, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
The article has been written and ready for publishing
Amk791 ( talk) 08:59, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
My first article called US Security Associates got deleted. can i know the reason behind that? now i created the article under the user profile? how to move this article to public? At what time i can move my article for public ?
Ussa.shini ( talk) 09:20, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Raydev ( talk) 09:22, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
I will copy this to the user talk, as well. Chzz ► 16:56, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
No1shah ( talk) 09:36, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Emd001 ( talk) 11:30, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Please review this brief outline of this accrediting body.
Amybinns (
talk)
13:23, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi Novice7 I can expand the lead a bit but is there something specific that makes it read like an advert? I'm not connected with this organisation and didn't intend this.
I've now expanded the lead and added date accessed to the {{ cite web}} references.
I would like to add pictures, but I can't seem to figure out how.
Would like feedback on my references.
FosterSwift ( talk) 15:25, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Would appreciate someone taking a look at this. I incorporated previous feedback in this version; I'd like to get it live.
Tryout22 ( talk) 16:01, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
...and so on.
Thanks for your feedback, but I believe all those questions are indeed cited in the references -- e.g., the Los Angeles Times obit, the author's own website, etc., all cited at the bottom of the article.
I Have just started my first article and before getting too far down the road wondered if anyone could take a look at it to confirm if the subject is worthy of inclusion. Am still in the process of writing, referenceing etc.
Thanks Bobble2005 ( talk) 16:08, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hoping to get feedback on how to properly expand this article.
Emilytsp ( talk) 17:09, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
This is a page about the comic book character Captain Canada. There is no page on Captain Canada or the Atlantis comic book series. There are links to different websites about him and links to the websites of the companies that own him.
Mikeseriously ( talk) 18:19, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Is this article acceptable? If so what do I do next? thanks
Stuartembury (
talk)
18:59, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
OlafASU ( talk) 19:47, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
How does the article look now? Thanks for the feedback.
FosterSwift (
talk)
19:50, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello,
I initiated a request for feedback the other day, and was told to add additional sources, which I have done. (I now have 5 sources, including a national distribution magazine and a nationally recognized news source from our area--the Independent).
If anyone would like to let me know if this article is ready for publication, or what other steps I must take, I would really appreciate it. My thanks.
Davidstreever ( talk) 20:01, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Would appreciate any feedback on this article, specifically with regard to citations. I'm having issues with formatting on citations.
Ericatoms (
talk)
20:22, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Please review this posting, as this is my first posting, on a company I found quite interesting.
I want to add more to it, like the FCC regulations, the Copyright Law, and how this is turning into quite a heated area for governmental intervention. But I wanted to see if I am on the right track first before volunteering more time.
Timothysmardin (
talk)
21:01, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
How can I add the resource: http://www.telegraph.co.uk/finance/personalfinance/2782339/Ahoy-me-hearties-Nows-a-good-time-to-push-the-boat-out.html to the Wiki page and should it be used?
The company also has Trademarks, both figurative and word. Is this useful relevant information?
This is my first page, any help is greatly appreciated. Didski ( talk) 22:04, 15 February 2011 (UTC)