I would be grateful for any ideas and sugegstions.
rajam (
talk) 02:49, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Ebodonne ( talk) 04:09, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
I'm just requesting feedback for my first article. I just finished reading the novel and noticed that it didn't have an article on wikipedia when I tried to look it up. I'd also like to link it in the page The King of Elfland's Daughter because there is a clever reference to that novel in the third chapter.
Eggshells ( talk) 05:14, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Just looking for some feedback. Let me know if something jumps out as needing attention.
Chrisbooth111 (
talk) 05:27, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Is everything OK with my article?
EHedenblad ( talk) 08:37, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
The comparison contains direct input from 4 authors of implementations and provides accurate, balanced and useful information. Please review ..
Oberstet ( talk) 08:56, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Hello, I am user DeltaShield.I am the creator of this article.I have another account which is: Faizilcool .I use DeltaShield to draft this article but I used Faizicool to create the final article of "Muhammad Syukri Ridwan".This article is true.Proof: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Park_View_Primary_School#Current_Senior_Soccer_Squad
DeltaShield ( talk) 09:32, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Any suggestions are welcome!
Blanche456 (
talk) 10:35, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Hello. Please provide any feedback on the new article. This is my first complete article in English wikipedia, so please be charitable.. Thanks!
Sonic1980 ( talk) 11:16, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Do comment for the improvement of this article. Thank you.
Manoj22majin 11:35, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Please review - is this interesting? Do questions arise that need answers? Thanks.
Mgirnius (
talk) 14:06, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Hi MarcusBritish,
Could you please do a quick edit of this page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Being_Born_Again_Couture_Fashion_Show? I have referenced it properly etc. Please take out "This article may contain wording that merely promotes the subject without imparting verifiable information. Please remove or replace such wording, unless you can cite independent sources that support the characterization." and "A major contributor to this article appears to have a close connection with its subject. It may require cleanup to comply with Wikipedia's content policies, particularly neutral point of view. Please discuss further on the talk page. (August 2011)" and "This article may contain inappropriate or misinterpreted citations that do not verify the text. Please help improve this article by checking for inaccuracies. (help, talk, get involved!) (August 2011)" if you are satified with it.
Thank you.
Domenico.y ( talk) 15:22, 24 August 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y
Domenico.y ( talk) 15:22, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
That's about all I can suggest - can't really "get involved" with a subject I know nothing about, but do contact Bonadea, and get their concerns addressed ASAP before someone decides to flag the article for Deletion because of those concerns not being dealt with.
Ma®©usBritish talk 12:30, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
Seeking feedback on this article (first published June 2011) because it is still listed as a new unreviewed article.
Tugboat2011 ( talk) 16:50, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
I cleaned up this article, added additional references and improved its neutrality. Could someone please review to determine if the current tags can be removed.
Here is a link to the old article: http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Trenbolone&oldid=444564842
Legion211 (
talk) 17:26, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Is this new article ok? Everything included is factual.
SScottDavis (
talk) 17:54, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Submitting my first creation page. Looking for advice. Thanks.
Cirquehuber ( talk) 18:30, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
This is a page for a Toronto based professional kickboxer. I would like to validate the resources, and request feedback, when editing a page on a specific person it is sometimes uneccesary to cite sources and would like clarification on this area. Specific editing of the page itself can be done accordingly.
Troysheridan (
talk) 19:21, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
I have written an article on the modern ruins of a luxury hotel campus on the croatian island Krk.
ThorstenSchroeteler (
talk) 20:16, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
This is the first time I have requested feedback on an article which is still a work in progress. The article is based on translations of the articles on Robert Sténuit in the French and Romanian Wikipedias (especially the more detailed latter), but therefore includes important statements from those articles which I have not been able to confirm -- hence the "Citation needed" templates, some with "reason" fields. I have not been able to consult the Subaqua article or the Sténuit book translated into Romanian (Lumile tainice în care m-am scufundat, presumably a translation of Ces mondes secrets où j'ai plongé) which were apparently used as sources by the author of the Romanian article, and which are therefore listed separately as references without inline citations.
The external link about Harry Reiseberg is there because there is as yet no Wikipedia article on him (or any other mention of him on Wikipedia, for that matter). I also can't tell if the "Librairie Hachette" which published Merveilieux monde souterrain is Hachette (publisher) or Hachette Filipacchi Médias, so there's no blue link to the publisher's article. I realize that the article should have references to several National Geographic articles, which I have not yet consulted.
Gildir (
talk) 21:22, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
hello sir, i need ur feedback on this article as i intend to publish it here. thank you
Reem attar ( talk) 22:07, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Let me know if you want me to re-review again, once you've looked into these.
Thanks, Ma®©usBritish talk 06:20, 30 August 2011 (UTC)
This one is my first article, before this I have edited my article based on true informaation. This topic is about my home town and its related.I want a feedback on this.
M. Adnan Khadim 00:00, 25 August 2011 (UTC)
125.129.107.133 ( talk) 13:57, 25 August 2011 (UTC)
I would be grateful for any ideas and sugegstions.
rajam (
talk) 02:49, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Ebodonne ( talk) 04:09, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
I'm just requesting feedback for my first article. I just finished reading the novel and noticed that it didn't have an article on wikipedia when I tried to look it up. I'd also like to link it in the page The King of Elfland's Daughter because there is a clever reference to that novel in the third chapter.
Eggshells ( talk) 05:14, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Just looking for some feedback. Let me know if something jumps out as needing attention.
Chrisbooth111 (
talk) 05:27, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Is everything OK with my article?
EHedenblad ( talk) 08:37, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
The comparison contains direct input from 4 authors of implementations and provides accurate, balanced and useful information. Please review ..
Oberstet ( talk) 08:56, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Hello, I am user DeltaShield.I am the creator of this article.I have another account which is: Faizilcool .I use DeltaShield to draft this article but I used Faizicool to create the final article of "Muhammad Syukri Ridwan".This article is true.Proof: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Park_View_Primary_School#Current_Senior_Soccer_Squad
DeltaShield ( talk) 09:32, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Any suggestions are welcome!
Blanche456 (
talk) 10:35, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Hello. Please provide any feedback on the new article. This is my first complete article in English wikipedia, so please be charitable.. Thanks!
Sonic1980 ( talk) 11:16, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Do comment for the improvement of this article. Thank you.
Manoj22majin 11:35, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Please review - is this interesting? Do questions arise that need answers? Thanks.
Mgirnius (
talk) 14:06, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Hi MarcusBritish,
Could you please do a quick edit of this page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Being_Born_Again_Couture_Fashion_Show? I have referenced it properly etc. Please take out "This article may contain wording that merely promotes the subject without imparting verifiable information. Please remove or replace such wording, unless you can cite independent sources that support the characterization." and "A major contributor to this article appears to have a close connection with its subject. It may require cleanup to comply with Wikipedia's content policies, particularly neutral point of view. Please discuss further on the talk page. (August 2011)" and "This article may contain inappropriate or misinterpreted citations that do not verify the text. Please help improve this article by checking for inaccuracies. (help, talk, get involved!) (August 2011)" if you are satified with it.
Thank you.
Domenico.y ( talk) 15:22, 24 August 2011 (UTC) Domenico.y
Domenico.y ( talk) 15:22, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
That's about all I can suggest - can't really "get involved" with a subject I know nothing about, but do contact Bonadea, and get their concerns addressed ASAP before someone decides to flag the article for Deletion because of those concerns not being dealt with.
Ma®©usBritish talk 12:30, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
Seeking feedback on this article (first published June 2011) because it is still listed as a new unreviewed article.
Tugboat2011 ( talk) 16:50, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
I cleaned up this article, added additional references and improved its neutrality. Could someone please review to determine if the current tags can be removed.
Here is a link to the old article: http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Trenbolone&oldid=444564842
Legion211 (
talk) 17:26, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Is this new article ok? Everything included is factual.
SScottDavis (
talk) 17:54, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Submitting my first creation page. Looking for advice. Thanks.
Cirquehuber ( talk) 18:30, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
This is a page for a Toronto based professional kickboxer. I would like to validate the resources, and request feedback, when editing a page on a specific person it is sometimes uneccesary to cite sources and would like clarification on this area. Specific editing of the page itself can be done accordingly.
Troysheridan (
talk) 19:21, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
I have written an article on the modern ruins of a luxury hotel campus on the croatian island Krk.
ThorstenSchroeteler (
talk) 20:16, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
This is the first time I have requested feedback on an article which is still a work in progress. The article is based on translations of the articles on Robert Sténuit in the French and Romanian Wikipedias (especially the more detailed latter), but therefore includes important statements from those articles which I have not been able to confirm -- hence the "Citation needed" templates, some with "reason" fields. I have not been able to consult the Subaqua article or the Sténuit book translated into Romanian (Lumile tainice în care m-am scufundat, presumably a translation of Ces mondes secrets où j'ai plongé) which were apparently used as sources by the author of the Romanian article, and which are therefore listed separately as references without inline citations.
The external link about Harry Reiseberg is there because there is as yet no Wikipedia article on him (or any other mention of him on Wikipedia, for that matter). I also can't tell if the "Librairie Hachette" which published Merveilieux monde souterrain is Hachette (publisher) or Hachette Filipacchi Médias, so there's no blue link to the publisher's article. I realize that the article should have references to several National Geographic articles, which I have not yet consulted.
Gildir (
talk) 21:22, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
hello sir, i need ur feedback on this article as i intend to publish it here. thank you
Reem attar ( talk) 22:07, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Let me know if you want me to re-review again, once you've looked into these.
Thanks, Ma®©usBritish talk 06:20, 30 August 2011 (UTC)
This one is my first article, before this I have edited my article based on true informaation. This topic is about my home town and its related.I want a feedback on this.
M. Adnan Khadim 00:00, 25 August 2011 (UTC)
125.129.107.133 ( talk) 13:57, 25 August 2011 (UTC)