Hi this is informational page about my fraternity. I would like to know if this would be good enough to post up.
DEPsi Proof ( talk) 01:53, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
I requested feedback on my userspace article a week prior to moving it to the main space (this date) but none was received. I have added more information, inline citations, and references and am open to any feedback that busy editors can offer. Thanks.
Architectsea ( talk) 04:47, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
I would appreciate input on form and content. This school is notable because of its unusual yet highly recognized international curriculum/program, its designation as an historic Landmark, and its award-winning facilities. Thanks.
Architectsea ( talk) 05:47, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
This is a new article on a previously unlisted subject. This is my first attempt at writing a wikipedia piece and before I go live I would like someone with more experience to give me guidance on any changes which they feel are required. Thank you
KatyOhara (
talk) 06:37, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
I have made the amendments as suggested apart from making this article more like the other 'stone' articles as I do not think this is what I am trying to acheive. I now feel that I need more help in making the necessary changes suitable for going up to mainspace. Perhaps the article is ready?
Ironimp ( talk) 09:13, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
I would really appreciate some feedback on this article. Thanks in advance!
Gaebler ( talk) 14:48, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
I have created this entry and would like feedback as to whether it is sufficiently objective. I have tried to be neutral and factual, but would welcome external feedback and constructive criticism.
Nicholasjameslowe (
talk) 16:02, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
Requesting feedback on my first article. Thanks for any assistance!
Der Bibliothekar (
talk) 16:22, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
Wow! Thanks so much for the advice. I will make the changes you suggested and go from there. Unfortunately I cannot claim fluency in German, but cheers for the offer. Der Bibliothekar ( talk) 14:46, 1 May 2011 (UTC)
Would like have some feedback about my page from an editor. This was a very timely project and I hope I did everything I was suppose to. I have email with permissions for photo's and received an O.K. from Wikipedia member to upload them. Any help or approval would be greatly appreciated! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ASKA_%28band%29 Thank You,
PennyPen (
talk) 17:05, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
Hi MatthewVanitas,
Thank you very very much for helping. In the begining I did sooo much reading... frankly my brain was mush!! This is new and sort of confusing to me. I have no personal friends to really ask about the "how do I..." so again thank you!
I read the article on Notability (music). I have cleaned up a bit and yeah... it's my first time. I am sure there are much better ways to code, but just wanted to do the best I could at figuring some of this out. Any help is so very much appreciated!!!
Please provide feedback on this article. Also, I would like to know how to get this article moved so it can be see by everyone. Thank you.
Tncscv (
talk) 17:32, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
need help formatting references and external links Lauren Eubanks ( talk) 20:01, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
Hi folks, I've just posted my first article, on the health journalist Fergus Walsh. I'd appreciate some (or a lot!) of feedback. Thanks.
Fulleraaron ( talk) 21:57, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
Matthew, thanks for the points. I've now fixed all of them, and added some external links. One of them (to the charity) might be questionable as it might appear to be advocacy. I'll remove it if you think so, but that pending, can the 2 'issue' templates be removed? Thanks again.
Hi this is informational page about my fraternity. I would like to know if this would be good enough to post up.
DEPsi Proof ( talk) 01:53, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
I requested feedback on my userspace article a week prior to moving it to the main space (this date) but none was received. I have added more information, inline citations, and references and am open to any feedback that busy editors can offer. Thanks.
Architectsea ( talk) 04:47, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
I would appreciate input on form and content. This school is notable because of its unusual yet highly recognized international curriculum/program, its designation as an historic Landmark, and its award-winning facilities. Thanks.
Architectsea ( talk) 05:47, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
This is a new article on a previously unlisted subject. This is my first attempt at writing a wikipedia piece and before I go live I would like someone with more experience to give me guidance on any changes which they feel are required. Thank you
KatyOhara (
talk) 06:37, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
I have made the amendments as suggested apart from making this article more like the other 'stone' articles as I do not think this is what I am trying to acheive. I now feel that I need more help in making the necessary changes suitable for going up to mainspace. Perhaps the article is ready?
Ironimp ( talk) 09:13, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
I would really appreciate some feedback on this article. Thanks in advance!
Gaebler ( talk) 14:48, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
I have created this entry and would like feedback as to whether it is sufficiently objective. I have tried to be neutral and factual, but would welcome external feedback and constructive criticism.
Nicholasjameslowe (
talk) 16:02, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
Requesting feedback on my first article. Thanks for any assistance!
Der Bibliothekar (
talk) 16:22, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
Wow! Thanks so much for the advice. I will make the changes you suggested and go from there. Unfortunately I cannot claim fluency in German, but cheers for the offer. Der Bibliothekar ( talk) 14:46, 1 May 2011 (UTC)
Would like have some feedback about my page from an editor. This was a very timely project and I hope I did everything I was suppose to. I have email with permissions for photo's and received an O.K. from Wikipedia member to upload them. Any help or approval would be greatly appreciated! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ASKA_%28band%29 Thank You,
PennyPen (
talk) 17:05, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
Hi MatthewVanitas,
Thank you very very much for helping. In the begining I did sooo much reading... frankly my brain was mush!! This is new and sort of confusing to me. I have no personal friends to really ask about the "how do I..." so again thank you!
I read the article on Notability (music). I have cleaned up a bit and yeah... it's my first time. I am sure there are much better ways to code, but just wanted to do the best I could at figuring some of this out. Any help is so very much appreciated!!!
Please provide feedback on this article. Also, I would like to know how to get this article moved so it can be see by everyone. Thank you.
Tncscv (
talk) 17:32, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
need help formatting references and external links Lauren Eubanks ( talk) 20:01, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
Hi folks, I've just posted my first article, on the health journalist Fergus Walsh. I'd appreciate some (or a lot!) of feedback. Thanks.
Fulleraaron ( talk) 21:57, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
Matthew, thanks for the points. I've now fixed all of them, and added some external links. One of them (to the charity) might be questionable as it might appear to be advocacy. I'll remove it if you think so, but that pending, can the 2 'issue' templates be removed? Thanks again.