I Would like your comments on my artcile. Many thanks Vinay
HaloAsia (
talk)
05:50, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
Cheers, Chzz ► 06:06, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
The article has been edited according to Wikipedia guidelines and I think it is good to be in the live article space. I would like some feedback about the quality of the article. Sudeep88 ( talk) 06:30, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
Hello Chzz and thanks for your valuable help on this article. I added couple of new sources and cited some line that you said needs citation. would you please double check it now if it is alright. Thanks again and I appreciate your help.
Partovi ( talk) 10:16, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
I would like any general feedback as this is my first article and also any advice as to why my first image isn't showing - is it to do with the tag I've chosen? Many thanks
Cghamel ( talk) 12:43, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
Chzz was born in 1837. <ref name=MyBook> "The book of Chzz", Aardvark Books, 2009. </ref> Chzz lives in Footown.<ref name=MyBook/>
Note that the second usage has a / (and no closing ref tag). This needs a reference section as above; please see user:chzz/demo/namedref to see the result.
This is new article about financial planner, author, radio and television host, Ray Lucia. Last year he was named one of the "100 Most Important Radio Talk Show Hosts in America." I am technical director for his television show, so would like the article to be checked by an unaffiliated editor. (As an aside, please see the Wikipedia:Conflict of interest page which reads, "Editors with COIs are strongly encouraged—but not actually required—to declare their interests, both on their user pages and on the talk page of the related article they are editing, particularly if those edits may be contested... When someone voluntarily discloses a conflict of interest, other editors should always assume the editor is trying to do the right thing. Do not use a voluntarily disclosed conflict of interest as a weapon against the editor.") Thank you!
Andihazelwood (
talk)
17:37, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
Hope that helps; I appreciate your honesty over COI, so if this sounds harsh, please don't take it that way; it's suggestions for improvement; I'm always v neutral, regardless of topic or COI.
If you like, give me a shout after addressing those concerns and I can remove the 'unreviewed' tag, if someone else does not do it. Cheers, Chzz ► 04:16, 12 October 2010 (UTC)
Creating an article. The stub message can be added if necessary. added press coverage to references to increase and satisfy reliable source requirement.
Anirudh Ranganath 18:33, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
IF SOME HAS SOME MORE RELIABLE AND PROPER CITED SOURCES FOR THE PAGE, CAN PLEASE HELP ME TO IMPROVE THIS PAGE?
IF YOU COULD FIND ANYTHING INAPPROPRIATE CAN PLEASE NOTIFY ME OF THAT ?
Puneetarora30 ( talk) 19:25, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
I Would like your comments on my artcile. Many thanks Vinay
HaloAsia (
talk)
05:50, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
Cheers, Chzz ► 06:06, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
The article has been edited according to Wikipedia guidelines and I think it is good to be in the live article space. I would like some feedback about the quality of the article. Sudeep88 ( talk) 06:30, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
Hello Chzz and thanks for your valuable help on this article. I added couple of new sources and cited some line that you said needs citation. would you please double check it now if it is alright. Thanks again and I appreciate your help.
Partovi ( talk) 10:16, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
I would like any general feedback as this is my first article and also any advice as to why my first image isn't showing - is it to do with the tag I've chosen? Many thanks
Cghamel ( talk) 12:43, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
Chzz was born in 1837. <ref name=MyBook> "The book of Chzz", Aardvark Books, 2009. </ref> Chzz lives in Footown.<ref name=MyBook/>
Note that the second usage has a / (and no closing ref tag). This needs a reference section as above; please see user:chzz/demo/namedref to see the result.
This is new article about financial planner, author, radio and television host, Ray Lucia. Last year he was named one of the "100 Most Important Radio Talk Show Hosts in America." I am technical director for his television show, so would like the article to be checked by an unaffiliated editor. (As an aside, please see the Wikipedia:Conflict of interest page which reads, "Editors with COIs are strongly encouraged—but not actually required—to declare their interests, both on their user pages and on the talk page of the related article they are editing, particularly if those edits may be contested... When someone voluntarily discloses a conflict of interest, other editors should always assume the editor is trying to do the right thing. Do not use a voluntarily disclosed conflict of interest as a weapon against the editor.") Thank you!
Andihazelwood (
talk)
17:37, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
Hope that helps; I appreciate your honesty over COI, so if this sounds harsh, please don't take it that way; it's suggestions for improvement; I'm always v neutral, regardless of topic or COI.
If you like, give me a shout after addressing those concerns and I can remove the 'unreviewed' tag, if someone else does not do it. Cheers, Chzz ► 04:16, 12 October 2010 (UTC)
Creating an article. The stub message can be added if necessary. added press coverage to references to increase and satisfy reliable source requirement.
Anirudh Ranganath 18:33, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
IF SOME HAS SOME MORE RELIABLE AND PROPER CITED SOURCES FOR THE PAGE, CAN PLEASE HELP ME TO IMPROVE THIS PAGE?
IF YOU COULD FIND ANYTHING INAPPROPRIATE CAN PLEASE NOTIFY ME OF THAT ?
Puneetarora30 ( talk) 19:25, 8 October 2010 (UTC)