Bob tiwilliger ( talk) 01:11, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
Hello,
I have created this draft, which is about a children's novel, and wonder if it needs more material under "Literary Significance and Reception," or any section(s), before it is good to be put into Wikipedia as a regular page. If you have other comments about it, I would appreciate them as well.
Thank you.
Layona1 ( talk) 01:20, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
Anyone have an ideas for extra information I might need to add?
Ladikit (
talk)
05:18, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
I have created this article about the National Business Initaitve and would value comments before uploading it. Most of the references to our work take the form of articles and News Briefs which are on our webpage.
NatlBusi (
talk)
11:02, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
<! Would appreciate further peer review following multiple edits I have made to deal with reported issues. Main article edit I made to make the writing style more neutral - see diff link I have had some peer review feedback and implemented a number of changes - most significant being the changing of the writing style to be more neutral. See diff link for major edit. http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Kindle_Banking_Systems&action=historysubmit&diff=389532654&oldid=389528389
I have inserted references to credible industry sources and external links also. Thanks for your assistance, Regards,Stephen -->
Stiofan.walsh ( talk) 13:08, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
This article is about a Dalit balladeer from Mumbai, who still has not got his space in Wiki. It is important that people know about him. He is famous and many news sites(times, rediff etc.) have covered his stories. I have added these sites as references. Right now I just have this much information about Sambhaji and am sure that more information will pour in once this article goes online. Can you guys make this article go online? Thanks!
Neo167 ( talk) 13:15, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
How can I improve the page? What other information needs to be added?
Soul Of Dawn ( talk) 13:57, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
I have revised the page based on S. Philbrick comments. Can someone please look and tell me how it is now?
I need also need help with the references section. I want to write more descriptive entries, but I'm not sure how. I do not understand the instructions on the "references page."
I am trying to get this to go public so any help would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you! Jackie
JackieVendetti ( talk) 15:29, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
Hummingbird3 ( talk) 16:16, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
*[http://www.example.com|The link's name goes here!]
I hope you understand. Chevy monte carlo 07:54, 19 October 2010 (UTC)
Any comments on this draft welcome.
PressedBack ( talk) 17:13, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
I want to make sure that the sources I have included sufficiently provide for the notoriety of this article. There is a another team in the same league with a wikipedia page and we want our team to be able to have one as well.
Also I wanted to upload our team's crest/logo to the page and wanted to know the best way to that. I would like to include it in the box at the top right of the page.
Dbnewcombe (
talk)
17:48, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
-- rcousine ( talk) 07:03, 19 October 2010 (UTC)
Hello. I just made this page live and would like your feedback. Thank you in advance.
5redfive (
talk)
18:55, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
How can I get a "Personal Information box" underneath the picture?
Thanks!
Keyzz (
talk)
20:01, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
I work for the Thompson-Nicola Regional District and would like to create a simple page for the Thompson-Nicola Film Commission, which we run. I have no invested interest in this.
TNRD ( talk) 23:19, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
Page for an SF Bay Area non-profit. Feedback welcomed.
Estronach ( talk) 23:33, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
Bob tiwilliger ( talk) 01:11, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
Hello,
I have created this draft, which is about a children's novel, and wonder if it needs more material under "Literary Significance and Reception," or any section(s), before it is good to be put into Wikipedia as a regular page. If you have other comments about it, I would appreciate them as well.
Thank you.
Layona1 ( talk) 01:20, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
Anyone have an ideas for extra information I might need to add?
Ladikit (
talk)
05:18, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
I have created this article about the National Business Initaitve and would value comments before uploading it. Most of the references to our work take the form of articles and News Briefs which are on our webpage.
NatlBusi (
talk)
11:02, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
<! Would appreciate further peer review following multiple edits I have made to deal with reported issues. Main article edit I made to make the writing style more neutral - see diff link I have had some peer review feedback and implemented a number of changes - most significant being the changing of the writing style to be more neutral. See diff link for major edit. http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Kindle_Banking_Systems&action=historysubmit&diff=389532654&oldid=389528389
I have inserted references to credible industry sources and external links also. Thanks for your assistance, Regards,Stephen -->
Stiofan.walsh ( talk) 13:08, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
This article is about a Dalit balladeer from Mumbai, who still has not got his space in Wiki. It is important that people know about him. He is famous and many news sites(times, rediff etc.) have covered his stories. I have added these sites as references. Right now I just have this much information about Sambhaji and am sure that more information will pour in once this article goes online. Can you guys make this article go online? Thanks!
Neo167 ( talk) 13:15, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
How can I improve the page? What other information needs to be added?
Soul Of Dawn ( talk) 13:57, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
I have revised the page based on S. Philbrick comments. Can someone please look and tell me how it is now?
I need also need help with the references section. I want to write more descriptive entries, but I'm not sure how. I do not understand the instructions on the "references page."
I am trying to get this to go public so any help would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you! Jackie
JackieVendetti ( talk) 15:29, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
Hummingbird3 ( talk) 16:16, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
*[http://www.example.com|The link's name goes here!]
I hope you understand. Chevy monte carlo 07:54, 19 October 2010 (UTC)
Any comments on this draft welcome.
PressedBack ( talk) 17:13, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
I want to make sure that the sources I have included sufficiently provide for the notoriety of this article. There is a another team in the same league with a wikipedia page and we want our team to be able to have one as well.
Also I wanted to upload our team's crest/logo to the page and wanted to know the best way to that. I would like to include it in the box at the top right of the page.
Dbnewcombe (
talk)
17:48, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
-- rcousine ( talk) 07:03, 19 October 2010 (UTC)
Hello. I just made this page live and would like your feedback. Thank you in advance.
5redfive (
talk)
18:55, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
How can I get a "Personal Information box" underneath the picture?
Thanks!
Keyzz (
talk)
20:01, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
I work for the Thompson-Nicola Regional District and would like to create a simple page for the Thompson-Nicola Film Commission, which we run. I have no invested interest in this.
TNRD ( talk) 23:19, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
Page for an SF Bay Area non-profit. Feedback welcomed.
Estronach ( talk) 23:33, 18 October 2010 (UTC)