Hello, This is my first article. I would appreciate feedback from anyone that has the time. Thank you.
Ready to go live?
New article. What do you think?
Please review.
Dear Wikipedians,
This is my First Wikipedia Article.
It's my long time desire to write a Quality & standard Article for Wikipedia.
I have spend nearly 4 days in learning before posting my article. please have a review my article & provide your 'valuable feedback'. ~~ Raj6644 ( talk) 11:20, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Dear Chevymontecarlo,
Thank you for your valuable feedback & time you have spared.
I have tweaked my article to look better.
I my level best to Condense the article into parts. Pls review & provide ur suggestion. 'I feel the article is ready to go live.'
Raj6644 ( talk) 07:46, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
Raj6644 ( talk) 12:38, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
I just moved this from user to mainspace, figuring it was good to go as a start while I continue to research/expand it with more source info and references (three references so far). Any feedback/suggestions would be most appreciated. :) Thanks, and all the best!
I've created a short article for a producer/director with reliable sources (newspapers, magazines, links to other notable people he's connected professionally). I would love some feedback on it. I would also like to know why at the top of it, it says "This is not a wikipedia article...". How do I get this published properly so that it does not have this note at the top? Thanks in advance for your help, Annunziata
~~webmistress 12:13, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for your reply. Sorry it took me a minute to get back to you but I was out of the country with only iphone connections. Originally, since this was my first article and I am a programmer, I was very diligent in making it much more rich (with pictures and categories and charts) but then I revised my tack when I read in the tutorials that I should start with less and then build from there. Here is a link to the first version ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Annunziatag/Doug_biro2), which is more in line with what you are thinking, but it is still missing some of the information (birth date, ex-spouse name, etc), so I went with what I had verified and planned to add from there. I am thinking that this "abridged" version makes it appear more like a stub, thus the note that it is "not a wikipedia article" which I think looks bad (for me and for the subject of the article). Please let me know your thoughts on this.
I added reliable sources and I believe that the article is validly important. Please contribute any feedback. Thanks.
Please review this article and let me know this can be accepted for Wikipedia. Thanks James
~~James Murday 17:41, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Please check if this Article is suitable for Wikipedia. Thanks.
Would you mind providing feedback for the page again, I have made various changes and added more references. Thanks!
Why is this page still considered a draft, and not yet officially published? Preston.bailey.intern ( talk) 19:43, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
I am currently starting to write about semi professional and professional soccer players. I have begun starting with a local talent Matt Rosenlund who has played all throughout the ranks in the native of my country and has a very promising future.
This article will bring him more exposure and see him get more opportunities then ever before. Currently playing in the Premier Development League of North America. He is playing at one of the highest levels in North America and should be shown exposure for that.
Wondering if this article is ready to go live?
I am currently starting to write about semi professional and professional soccer players. I have begun starting with a local talent Matt Rosenlund who has played all throughout the ranks in the native of my country and has a very promising future.
This article will bring him more exposure and see him get more opportunities then ever before. Currently playing in the Premier Development League of North America. He is playing at one of the highest levels of soccer in North America.
There are sources, but I have more coming. So I know this is just shy of being ready, but would appreciate any feed back.
I intend to add some pictures once I get permission / take them myself. In the meantime, I'd love some feedback on other information to include in the article. I think I may have erred on the side of "less-is-more".
Hello, This is my first article. I would appreciate feedback from anyone that has the time. Thank you.
Ready to go live?
New article. What do you think?
Please review.
Dear Wikipedians,
This is my First Wikipedia Article.
It's my long time desire to write a Quality & standard Article for Wikipedia.
I have spend nearly 4 days in learning before posting my article. please have a review my article & provide your 'valuable feedback'. ~~ Raj6644 ( talk) 11:20, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Dear Chevymontecarlo,
Thank you for your valuable feedback & time you have spared.
I have tweaked my article to look better.
I my level best to Condense the article into parts. Pls review & provide ur suggestion. 'I feel the article is ready to go live.'
Raj6644 ( talk) 07:46, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
Raj6644 ( talk) 12:38, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
I just moved this from user to mainspace, figuring it was good to go as a start while I continue to research/expand it with more source info and references (three references so far). Any feedback/suggestions would be most appreciated. :) Thanks, and all the best!
I've created a short article for a producer/director with reliable sources (newspapers, magazines, links to other notable people he's connected professionally). I would love some feedback on it. I would also like to know why at the top of it, it says "This is not a wikipedia article...". How do I get this published properly so that it does not have this note at the top? Thanks in advance for your help, Annunziata
~~webmistress 12:13, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for your reply. Sorry it took me a minute to get back to you but I was out of the country with only iphone connections. Originally, since this was my first article and I am a programmer, I was very diligent in making it much more rich (with pictures and categories and charts) but then I revised my tack when I read in the tutorials that I should start with less and then build from there. Here is a link to the first version ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Annunziatag/Doug_biro2), which is more in line with what you are thinking, but it is still missing some of the information (birth date, ex-spouse name, etc), so I went with what I had verified and planned to add from there. I am thinking that this "abridged" version makes it appear more like a stub, thus the note that it is "not a wikipedia article" which I think looks bad (for me and for the subject of the article). Please let me know your thoughts on this.
I added reliable sources and I believe that the article is validly important. Please contribute any feedback. Thanks.
Please review this article and let me know this can be accepted for Wikipedia. Thanks James
~~James Murday 17:41, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Please check if this Article is suitable for Wikipedia. Thanks.
Would you mind providing feedback for the page again, I have made various changes and added more references. Thanks!
Why is this page still considered a draft, and not yet officially published? Preston.bailey.intern ( talk) 19:43, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
I am currently starting to write about semi professional and professional soccer players. I have begun starting with a local talent Matt Rosenlund who has played all throughout the ranks in the native of my country and has a very promising future.
This article will bring him more exposure and see him get more opportunities then ever before. Currently playing in the Premier Development League of North America. He is playing at one of the highest levels in North America and should be shown exposure for that.
Wondering if this article is ready to go live?
I am currently starting to write about semi professional and professional soccer players. I have begun starting with a local talent Matt Rosenlund who has played all throughout the ranks in the native of my country and has a very promising future.
This article will bring him more exposure and see him get more opportunities then ever before. Currently playing in the Premier Development League of North America. He is playing at one of the highest levels of soccer in North America.
There are sources, but I have more coming. So I know this is just shy of being ready, but would appreciate any feed back.
I intend to add some pictures once I get permission / take them myself. In the meantime, I'd love some feedback on other information to include in the article. I think I may have erred on the side of "less-is-more".