Hello Again.
I would like to ask for feedback and review on this aricle. This is my first article, so I would gladly appreciate all the feedback, suggestion and the review - making sure it has met the Wikipedia standard and what needs to be done if it hasn't, so the unreviewed article tag can be removed or not.
As a summary, She's the first is a non-profit organization that started as a media campaign.
Thank you all. Haengbokhada ( talk) 03:33, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Dear All, Please provide your feedback for this article. I would like to know how it can be made better and up to the wikipedia standards. As a summary, Le Mont High is a new school being started in Lavasa (City near Pune), offering students a nurturing and caring learning environment.
Lmhlavasa ( talk) 08:06, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Hey guys, first time writer just wondering if i could get some advice on my article. Cheers.
Gerrickbrooke (
talk) 08:49, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Is this article notible?
Krain Court (
talk) 10:53, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Can this be approved please?
Sheltster ( talk) 11:12, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
feedback required
Krain Court ( talk) 11:53, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
I realise that other sources might be necessary, but it is quite a short article. If this is still a criticism I will work on finding more sources. Cassiewerber ( talk) 13:14, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Added new references and external links, please consider the new article
Iulia e ( talk) 13:21, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Please could anyone give me some feedback on the article. I have read all of Wiki's help but as they are notreally versed in specialist subjects I get bored of reading 'reference'. I have referenced the article with some of the most eminent scientists currently working on the geological field and the most comprehensive and accepted text on UK geology. There may not be hundreds of references but that would seem to hide the most relevant references in order to read further. Basically I am asking.... is this ok?
I will be expanding the article to include descriptions of the units of the various geological formations and their gamma ray logs etc. and so on.
Thank you very much for your time.
Russell
81.156.142.183 ( talk) 16:12, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Hello
This is commensurate with the 'Uriconian' article, please could this be reviewed?
Thank you for your time.
Russell
81.156.142.183 ( talk) 16:15, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
I would like to request feedback from the Wiki-Community on an article I have been assembling on my user page. I am looking for Wiki-Experts to help with the following:
The subject matter is "Elevance Renewable Sciences". The company uses a Nobel Prize winning technology to create renewable chemicals. The article I created is well referenced both by outside sources and wikipedia articles as well.
Note: I would like to disclose to the Wiki-Community that I am currently employed by Elevance. My affliation with Elevance is important due to my desire to have Elevance represented on Wikipedia. I understand that I cannot post a page due to a clear conflict of interest. My hope is that the Wiki-Community will consider the relevance of creating an Elevance entry based on the information below, as well as the large volume of independent articles that have been published by many mainstream and industry media sources, such as The Economist, Rueters, BusinessWeek, Crain's, ICIS News and more.
Thank you for your time an dconsideration,
Mike
Michael.logsdon ( talk) 16:26, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Obviously I have COI, but articles about my band( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/We_%28group%29) and bandmate ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DJ_Olive) already exist. So I thought this would be the most appropriate place to suggest this article. I modeled my article after the two that have been accepted.
LloopManalog (
talk) 16:56, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I'd like someone with more editing experience to say if my new article is eligible for moving from my User area to WP proper.
The reason I think it's notable is because the film is a unique document of where many world-renowned bands originate, and the cultural importance of that music community.
There are more articles on the web (e.g. http://www.musicinoxford.co.uk/2010/12/05/musicinoxford-co-uk-interviews-jon-spira/, http://www.indiegogo.com/blog/2010/10/6q-with-jon-spira-of-anyone-can-play-guitar.html), but I guess they're not deemed reliable.
The film hasn't been released yet, so If that's a problem for notability, fair enough.
Cheers, Dave.
DavidABalch ( talk) 21:10, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Posting this on behalf of a new editor.
Proposed title Mutualink Interoperability Concepts
Any feedback would be appreciated
SPhilbrick T 21:12, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Good Content and needed more information Mohamed S El-Din 22:17, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
I found a missing Wikipedia entry because it had been deleted due to poor information quality. As such, I have tried to condense the large amount of information in the large article found in the Memory Alpha Wiki.
Have a I formatted my references properly? Do I need to have more bibliography information for the Star Trek Encyclopedia (a book)? In general, did I balance brevity with adressing key content points?
I could really use suggestions about linking this within the Wiki, although the fact that multiple pages would link to it as redirects and for content would help.
NerdChieftain ( talk) 03:39, 9 December 2010 (UTC)
Hello Again.
I would like to ask for feedback and review on this aricle. This is my first article, so I would gladly appreciate all the feedback, suggestion and the review - making sure it has met the Wikipedia standard and what needs to be done if it hasn't, so the unreviewed article tag can be removed or not.
As a summary, She's the first is a non-profit organization that started as a media campaign.
Thank you all. Haengbokhada ( talk) 03:33, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Dear All, Please provide your feedback for this article. I would like to know how it can be made better and up to the wikipedia standards. As a summary, Le Mont High is a new school being started in Lavasa (City near Pune), offering students a nurturing and caring learning environment.
Lmhlavasa ( talk) 08:06, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Hey guys, first time writer just wondering if i could get some advice on my article. Cheers.
Gerrickbrooke (
talk) 08:49, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Is this article notible?
Krain Court (
talk) 10:53, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Can this be approved please?
Sheltster ( talk) 11:12, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
feedback required
Krain Court ( talk) 11:53, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
I realise that other sources might be necessary, but it is quite a short article. If this is still a criticism I will work on finding more sources. Cassiewerber ( talk) 13:14, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Added new references and external links, please consider the new article
Iulia e ( talk) 13:21, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Please could anyone give me some feedback on the article. I have read all of Wiki's help but as they are notreally versed in specialist subjects I get bored of reading 'reference'. I have referenced the article with some of the most eminent scientists currently working on the geological field and the most comprehensive and accepted text on UK geology. There may not be hundreds of references but that would seem to hide the most relevant references in order to read further. Basically I am asking.... is this ok?
I will be expanding the article to include descriptions of the units of the various geological formations and their gamma ray logs etc. and so on.
Thank you very much for your time.
Russell
81.156.142.183 ( talk) 16:12, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Hello
This is commensurate with the 'Uriconian' article, please could this be reviewed?
Thank you for your time.
Russell
81.156.142.183 ( talk) 16:15, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
I would like to request feedback from the Wiki-Community on an article I have been assembling on my user page. I am looking for Wiki-Experts to help with the following:
The subject matter is "Elevance Renewable Sciences". The company uses a Nobel Prize winning technology to create renewable chemicals. The article I created is well referenced both by outside sources and wikipedia articles as well.
Note: I would like to disclose to the Wiki-Community that I am currently employed by Elevance. My affliation with Elevance is important due to my desire to have Elevance represented on Wikipedia. I understand that I cannot post a page due to a clear conflict of interest. My hope is that the Wiki-Community will consider the relevance of creating an Elevance entry based on the information below, as well as the large volume of independent articles that have been published by many mainstream and industry media sources, such as The Economist, Rueters, BusinessWeek, Crain's, ICIS News and more.
Thank you for your time an dconsideration,
Mike
Michael.logsdon ( talk) 16:26, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Obviously I have COI, but articles about my band( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/We_%28group%29) and bandmate ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DJ_Olive) already exist. So I thought this would be the most appropriate place to suggest this article. I modeled my article after the two that have been accepted.
LloopManalog (
talk) 16:56, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I'd like someone with more editing experience to say if my new article is eligible for moving from my User area to WP proper.
The reason I think it's notable is because the film is a unique document of where many world-renowned bands originate, and the cultural importance of that music community.
There are more articles on the web (e.g. http://www.musicinoxford.co.uk/2010/12/05/musicinoxford-co-uk-interviews-jon-spira/, http://www.indiegogo.com/blog/2010/10/6q-with-jon-spira-of-anyone-can-play-guitar.html), but I guess they're not deemed reliable.
The film hasn't been released yet, so If that's a problem for notability, fair enough.
Cheers, Dave.
DavidABalch ( talk) 21:10, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Posting this on behalf of a new editor.
Proposed title Mutualink Interoperability Concepts
Any feedback would be appreciated
SPhilbrick T 21:12, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Good Content and needed more information Mohamed S El-Din 22:17, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
I found a missing Wikipedia entry because it had been deleted due to poor information quality. As such, I have tried to condense the large amount of information in the large article found in the Memory Alpha Wiki.
Have a I formatted my references properly? Do I need to have more bibliography information for the Star Trek Encyclopedia (a book)? In general, did I balance brevity with adressing key content points?
I could really use suggestions about linking this within the Wiki, although the fact that multiple pages would link to it as redirects and for content would help.
NerdChieftain ( talk) 03:39, 9 December 2010 (UTC)