I want to know if this is good enough to start a stub as a main page. I believe it is good enough, but let me know what else I could add if this isn't the case.
9inchsamurai (
talk)
02:08, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
hi i finally been able to make Moose Knuckles a final page, but for it to stay a page I would need the help from a lot of people, i manage to add proper sources along with proper citation. I feel like i am missing some information along with i need more sources, but due to Moose Knuckles being a new company, i am constantly adding sources when i come across more useful information, so it could stay an official wikipedia article
i also have a talk page User:Demick514/Moose_Knuckles on December 1st .
if anyone has some tips for me i would appreciate it alot thanks
Demick514 ( talk) 03:27, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
hi Chevymontecarlo i understand what your talking about, As i was writing this article, i was debating if it might sound too much like advertisement which i was trying to avoid. I guess the only way to actually know if its more as an advertisement is to have more people reading it. Im going to work more on it, if i am not wrong, to me i feel the product features seems like advertisement, it would be great if you could get back to me and tell me which parts you think are. thanks Demick514 ( talk) 15:23, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
I used the article Wizard for this article, but didn't see where I was supposed to add categories. I have seen elsewhere that an article must have categories. Was I supposed to put them in somewhere?
Thanks!
RiverWriter ( talk) 05:56, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
[[Category:Companies]]
Hope this is useful. Chevy monte carlo 07:54, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
Not sure how many or how much more reliable the sources attached to this article here could possibly be. I am new to the process, but this person's notability should be fairly obvious to anyone even casually perusing either the article or the sources provided. He was in one of the most influential American indie rock bands ever to exist, has written an award-winning novel and just published another which is also being published in France and Italy, has in addition published an acclaimed work of non-fiction, was Senior Editor at Spin Magazine and contributing writer/editor to many others, and is a well-known screenwriter who is currently working with the Oscar-winning drector Steven Soderbergh on a forthcoming movie musical. Among other things. All of these are well-documented -- possibly over-documented here. Guided By Voices, his former band, Kim Deal, his ex-fiancée, all of his produced films, Steven Soderbergh, and his publisher all have Wikipedia pages. As a baseline for notability, he would seem to more than meet the criteria in several disciplines ranging over the last twenty years. Hence my confusion. Any help would be most appreciated.
Sybilline (
talk)
06:30, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
<ref>[http://www.example.com|Reference name goes here!]</ref>
Good luck! Chevy monte carlo 08:04, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
Thanks! I will try that. Sybilline ( talk) 15:57, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
My first page - appreciate feedback, particularly if I need to deal further with the Bot copyright query.
Localcouncil (
talk)
06:55, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
A brief information page about international school in Lavasa, called Le Mont High.
Lmhlavasa ( talk) 07:25, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
This is my first article. I'd like to know if it is acceptable.
Joe MacAlleli (
talk)
10:24, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I've been working on the Estill Voice Training article since August and it's now fairly stable. I would appreciate an independent view on where I should focus or if anything else should be worked on before I submit for Wikipedia Peer Review. Many thanks in advance.
Knavesdied (
talk)
17:13, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
Initial draft, seeking feedback prior to live pub. Thanks!
63.228.115.141 ( talk) 19:47, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
My first article so I want to be sure I get it right. This isn't meant to be a major article but given that it was significant to the geographic area, and resulted in some national NTSB recommendations involving driver's licenses, I thought it deserved a page. It took me quite a while to find references; any further search ideas are welcome!
Sonria ( talk) 22:18, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
Hello , This draft article acknowledges a known SaaS solution provider in the Learning Management System space. With over a million users in many different countries, Absorb LMS is described in a brief. I have included key citations/references for this article and I have reviewed the content for accuracy and neutrality. Can you please review it and let me know what you think as I'd like to post it to the main space soon? Thanks- also if you have any other suggestions please let me know?
I also wanted to state up front that I am going to be starting in a position with the company that owns Absorb Anywhere LMS on Dec 14/10. They did not ask me, nor are they paying me to write this article for them- but I did make them aware that I was going to contribute an article about them to Wikipedia. I contributed it because they are significant in their field , have a growing international presence and they should be on the list of LMS solutions, identified as a technology provider and an innovator in their field. I thought that it would be a good thing to do for them and I began this article before I knew that I was going to join them. Please let me know if everything looks to be in order, or if there is any issue at all with me submitting this draft. thanks. Intueri ( talk) 23:37, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
I want to know if this is good enough to start a stub as a main page. I believe it is good enough, but let me know what else I could add if this isn't the case.
9inchsamurai (
talk)
02:08, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
hi i finally been able to make Moose Knuckles a final page, but for it to stay a page I would need the help from a lot of people, i manage to add proper sources along with proper citation. I feel like i am missing some information along with i need more sources, but due to Moose Knuckles being a new company, i am constantly adding sources when i come across more useful information, so it could stay an official wikipedia article
i also have a talk page User:Demick514/Moose_Knuckles on December 1st .
if anyone has some tips for me i would appreciate it alot thanks
Demick514 ( talk) 03:27, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
hi Chevymontecarlo i understand what your talking about, As i was writing this article, i was debating if it might sound too much like advertisement which i was trying to avoid. I guess the only way to actually know if its more as an advertisement is to have more people reading it. Im going to work more on it, if i am not wrong, to me i feel the product features seems like advertisement, it would be great if you could get back to me and tell me which parts you think are. thanks Demick514 ( talk) 15:23, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
I used the article Wizard for this article, but didn't see where I was supposed to add categories. I have seen elsewhere that an article must have categories. Was I supposed to put them in somewhere?
Thanks!
RiverWriter ( talk) 05:56, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
[[Category:Companies]]
Hope this is useful. Chevy monte carlo 07:54, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
Not sure how many or how much more reliable the sources attached to this article here could possibly be. I am new to the process, but this person's notability should be fairly obvious to anyone even casually perusing either the article or the sources provided. He was in one of the most influential American indie rock bands ever to exist, has written an award-winning novel and just published another which is also being published in France and Italy, has in addition published an acclaimed work of non-fiction, was Senior Editor at Spin Magazine and contributing writer/editor to many others, and is a well-known screenwriter who is currently working with the Oscar-winning drector Steven Soderbergh on a forthcoming movie musical. Among other things. All of these are well-documented -- possibly over-documented here. Guided By Voices, his former band, Kim Deal, his ex-fiancée, all of his produced films, Steven Soderbergh, and his publisher all have Wikipedia pages. As a baseline for notability, he would seem to more than meet the criteria in several disciplines ranging over the last twenty years. Hence my confusion. Any help would be most appreciated.
Sybilline (
talk)
06:30, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
<ref>[http://www.example.com|Reference name goes here!]</ref>
Good luck! Chevy monte carlo 08:04, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
Thanks! I will try that. Sybilline ( talk) 15:57, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
My first page - appreciate feedback, particularly if I need to deal further with the Bot copyright query.
Localcouncil (
talk)
06:55, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
A brief information page about international school in Lavasa, called Le Mont High.
Lmhlavasa ( talk) 07:25, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
This is my first article. I'd like to know if it is acceptable.
Joe MacAlleli (
talk)
10:24, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I've been working on the Estill Voice Training article since August and it's now fairly stable. I would appreciate an independent view on where I should focus or if anything else should be worked on before I submit for Wikipedia Peer Review. Many thanks in advance.
Knavesdied (
talk)
17:13, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
Initial draft, seeking feedback prior to live pub. Thanks!
63.228.115.141 ( talk) 19:47, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
My first article so I want to be sure I get it right. This isn't meant to be a major article but given that it was significant to the geographic area, and resulted in some national NTSB recommendations involving driver's licenses, I thought it deserved a page. It took me quite a while to find references; any further search ideas are welcome!
Sonria ( talk) 22:18, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
Hello , This draft article acknowledges a known SaaS solution provider in the Learning Management System space. With over a million users in many different countries, Absorb LMS is described in a brief. I have included key citations/references for this article and I have reviewed the content for accuracy and neutrality. Can you please review it and let me know what you think as I'd like to post it to the main space soon? Thanks- also if you have any other suggestions please let me know?
I also wanted to state up front that I am going to be starting in a position with the company that owns Absorb Anywhere LMS on Dec 14/10. They did not ask me, nor are they paying me to write this article for them- but I did make them aware that I was going to contribute an article about them to Wikipedia. I contributed it because they are significant in their field , have a growing international presence and they should be on the list of LMS solutions, identified as a technology provider and an innovator in their field. I thought that it would be a good thing to do for them and I began this article before I knew that I was going to join them. Please let me know if everything looks to be in order, or if there is any issue at all with me submitting this draft. thanks. Intueri ( talk) 23:37, 5 December 2010 (UTC)