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I think this article is already good (it is, in fact, a
Good Article) but I'm trying to figure out where to focus to take it to the next level. I want to add a little bit more information about Zelda's paintings and improve the final section that mentions her modern interpretations. If anyone has suggestions regarding this, they would be greatly appreciated. General copy-editing, structure, flow concerns -- any of that -- would be adored as well. Also image ideas. Basically any thoughts at all. Thanks,
JayHenry (
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04:09, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
Prose generally good, just a few things you could work on... dihydrogen monoxide ( H2O) 05:00, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
Finally got some time to myself, so here I am. I greatly enjoyed reading and learning about Zelda and I think that overall this article is very good. Some of the writing could be finessed, however, so most of my comments are in regards to that:
Overall, very clean and intriguing. I think Zelda is fairly portrayed, which is no easy feat. The main thing bugging me is the lack of consistency with the names, but I think this article will fare well at FAC once it's ready. Great job, Jay! María ( habla con migo) 13:07, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I think this article is already good (it is, in fact, a
Good Article) but I'm trying to figure out where to focus to take it to the next level. I want to add a little bit more information about Zelda's paintings and improve the final section that mentions her modern interpretations. If anyone has suggestions regarding this, they would be greatly appreciated. General copy-editing, structure, flow concerns -- any of that -- would be adored as well. Also image ideas. Basically any thoughts at all. Thanks,
JayHenry (
talk)
04:09, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
Prose generally good, just a few things you could work on... dihydrogen monoxide ( H2O) 05:00, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
Finally got some time to myself, so here I am. I greatly enjoyed reading and learning about Zelda and I think that overall this article is very good. Some of the writing could be finessed, however, so most of my comments are in regards to that:
Overall, very clean and intriguing. I think Zelda is fairly portrayed, which is no easy feat. The main thing bugging me is the lack of consistency with the names, but I think this article will fare well at FAC once it's ready. Great job, Jay! María ( habla con migo) 13:07, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
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