I would like some feedback on how to better develop this article. Any tips (such as prose, content recommendations) on how to improve this article to possibly FA status would be greatly appreciated.
Teemu0822:05, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply
Hi Teemu08! Nice job! According to me, this article should at least feature a section about the musical content (and maybe the lyrics too) to reach the FA status.
Frédérick Lacasse23:12, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.[?]
It has an image, but the automated process didn't recognize it because it was in the infobox. Free-use wouldn't apply in the case of most articles about albums. — WiseKwai23:55, 9 January 2007 (UTC)reply
Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
Alright, I've incorporated what I can from the automated program, and I plan on adding a section about album content before I submit this to FAC. I'd love to hear some more suggestions if they're out there.
Teemu0806:35, 13 January 2007 (UTC)reply
I would like some feedback on how to better develop this article. Any tips (such as prose, content recommendations) on how to improve this article to possibly FA status would be greatly appreciated.
Teemu0822:05, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply
Hi Teemu08! Nice job! According to me, this article should at least feature a section about the musical content (and maybe the lyrics too) to reach the FA status.
Frédérick Lacasse23:12, 2 January 2007 (UTC)reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.[?]
It has an image, but the automated process didn't recognize it because it was in the infobox. Free-use wouldn't apply in the case of most articles about albums. — WiseKwai23:55, 9 January 2007 (UTC)reply
Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
Alright, I've incorporated what I can from the automated program, and I plan on adding a section about album content before I submit this to FAC. I'd love to hear some more suggestions if they're out there.
Teemu0806:35, 13 January 2007 (UTC)reply