This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I'm going to pursue an FAC for it, in keeping with the
South Park featured topic drive. The content and sourcing is all there, I think, but I want to make sure it all works grammatically. Thanks! —
Hunter
Kahn (
c)
04:02, 17 September 2009 (UTC)
I think this needs polishing and restructuring before it is ready for FAC. Many of my comments seem to be applicable here as well:
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I'm going to pursue an FAC for it, in keeping with the
South Park featured topic drive. The content and sourcing is all there, I think, but I want to make sure it all works grammatically. Thanks! —
Hunter
Kahn (
c)
04:02, 17 September 2009 (UTC)
I think this needs polishing and restructuring before it is ready for FAC. Many of my comments seem to be applicable here as well: