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WALL-E is an article I've been aiming FA for since I saw the movie and I've been sandboxing and struggling with it for some time but I recently finished off Themes, and I'm looking for further advice, like whether it needs a Cast section, any more suitable images, MOS or copyediting issues, etc etc.
Thanks, Alientraveller ( talk) 23:32, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
Great job, and best of luck with the FA process! - Another Believer ( talk) 01:39, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
Doing... Saw this movie tonight and loved it. I came to the Wikipedia article to look up a couple things when I got home and was delighted to see a PR had recently opened. I need to finish another PR (was interrupted mid-edit) but will definitely do Wall-E before the weekend's over! If you link to the 'good' version of the synopsis I can compare it with whatever's there when I get a chance to review this weekend, and work from there. Natural Cut ( talk) 08:07, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
Comments from Ealdgyth ( talk · contribs)
Minor comment Plot section looks to be a bit long. Can it be trimmed at all. BUC ( talk) 15:46, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
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WhatisFeelings? ( talk) 01:14, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
In regard to my article on Wall-E, (and I'm not sure why you Wikipedia types don't think to do this) -- you can email me directly through my web site to ask me any question you might have. There actually are instructions on my site regarding your use of my work -- and more than a little information outlining the articles. If you want to email me directly, it's ronbarba@aol.com. -- Ron Barbagallo
This peer review discussion has been closed.
WALL-E is an article I've been aiming FA for since I saw the movie and I've been sandboxing and struggling with it for some time but I recently finished off Themes, and I'm looking for further advice, like whether it needs a Cast section, any more suitable images, MOS or copyediting issues, etc etc.
Thanks, Alientraveller ( talk) 23:32, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
Great job, and best of luck with the FA process! - Another Believer ( talk) 01:39, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
Doing... Saw this movie tonight and loved it. I came to the Wikipedia article to look up a couple things when I got home and was delighted to see a PR had recently opened. I need to finish another PR (was interrupted mid-edit) but will definitely do Wall-E before the weekend's over! If you link to the 'good' version of the synopsis I can compare it with whatever's there when I get a chance to review this weekend, and work from there. Natural Cut ( talk) 08:07, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
Comments from Ealdgyth ( talk · contribs)
Minor comment Plot section looks to be a bit long. Can it be trimmed at all. BUC ( talk) 15:46, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
comment
WhatisFeelings? ( talk) 01:14, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
In regard to my article on Wall-E, (and I'm not sure why you Wikipedia types don't think to do this) -- you can email me directly through my web site to ask me any question you might have. There actually are instructions on my site regarding your use of my work -- and more than a little information outlining the articles. If you want to email me directly, it's ronbarba@aol.com. -- Ron Barbagallo