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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm aiming for FA status. The article is a GA and the reviewer was pretty impressed with its quality. I'm pretty condifent in the referencing and comprehensiveness, but I'd really like someone with a native-speaker competence of English to review the grammar and style; I've had FACs fail solely based on that criterion in the past and I'm not a native speaker. If there's anything else worth mentioning, of course, don't hesitate to write :) Any feedback will be appreciated.
Thanks, Todor → Bozhinov 14:24, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: I enjoyed reading this article, which seems comprehensive, well-illustrated, stable, and factually accurate. The images look fine, and the licenses are all in order, as far as I can tell. I see a problem with the positioning of three of the images. MOS:IMAGES says, "Do not place left-aligned images directly below a subsection-level heading (=== or lower), as this sometimes disconnects the heading from the text that follows it. This can often be avoided by shifting left-aligned images down a paragraph or two."
Here are a few suggestions for improving the prose:
Lead
Historical background
Early life, education and monkhood
Hitov's detachment and Second Bulgarian Legion
Bulgarian tours and work in Romania
Creation of the Internal Revolutionary Organisation
Capture and execution
Revolutionary theory and ideas
Commemoration
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog. That is where I found this one. Finetooth ( talk) 05:18, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I'm aiming for FA status. The article is a GA and the reviewer was pretty impressed with its quality. I'm pretty condifent in the referencing and comprehensiveness, but I'd really like someone with a native-speaker competence of English to review the grammar and style; I've had FACs fail solely based on that criterion in the past and I'm not a native speaker. If there's anything else worth mentioning, of course, don't hesitate to write :) Any feedback will be appreciated.
Thanks, Todor → Bozhinov 14:24, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: I enjoyed reading this article, which seems comprehensive, well-illustrated, stable, and factually accurate. The images look fine, and the licenses are all in order, as far as I can tell. I see a problem with the positioning of three of the images. MOS:IMAGES says, "Do not place left-aligned images directly below a subsection-level heading (=== or lower), as this sometimes disconnects the heading from the text that follows it. This can often be avoided by shifting left-aligned images down a paragraph or two."
Here are a few suggestions for improving the prose:
Lead
Historical background
Early life, education and monkhood
Hitov's detachment and Second Bulgarian Legion
Bulgarian tours and work in Romania
Creation of the Internal Revolutionary Organisation
Capture and execution
Revolutionary theory and ideas
Commemoration
I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog. That is where I found this one. Finetooth ( talk) 05:18, 20 January 2009 (UTC)