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I've listed this article for peer review because I would really like some additional feedback on the work.
Thanks, ABrundage, Texas A&M University ( talk) 02:08, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: An interesting article, in which I learned for example that bedbugs are hemiptera or true bugs. While it is clear that a lot of work has gone into this, and the author(s) are knowledgable about the subject, but it needs a lot of work to conform to Wikipedia's Manual of Style - see WP:MOS. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
Hope this helps, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 05:24, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would really like some additional feedback on the work.
Thanks, ABrundage, Texas A&M University ( talk) 02:08, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: An interesting article, in which I learned for example that bedbugs are hemiptera or true bugs. While it is clear that a lot of work has gone into this, and the author(s) are knowledgable about the subject, but it needs a lot of work to conform to Wikipedia's Manual of Style - see WP:MOS. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
Hope this helps, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 05:24, 5 April 2008 (UTC)