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I've listed this article for peer review because I wish for it to become a good article, and would like to find out what should be done before it can become a good article.
Comment: I know, since I was the editor who made it, that it needs more "mainstream" sources for the reception section. Unfortunately, those aren't out yet.--Gen. Quon(Talk)21:49, 23 June 2012 (UTC)reply
Comments
"Part two aired the next week" the following week?
"received a household rating of 0.2" outside the US/Canada this is entirely meaningless I'm afraid!
"making it the highest episode ever broadcast..." highest episode of My Little Pony or any show?
" In part one of the episode..." actually you said it was two episodes, so perhaps "in the first episode of the pair" or something similar?
Infobox image caption needs no period.
Infobox caption: "center" do you mean the big one? Not actually center... would think about rephrasing this with "from top left, clockwise... " so there's no ambiguity.
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I wish for it to become a good article, and would like to find out what should be done before it can become a good article.
Comment: I know, since I was the editor who made it, that it needs more "mainstream" sources for the reception section. Unfortunately, those aren't out yet.--Gen. Quon(Talk)21:49, 23 June 2012 (UTC)reply
Comments
"Part two aired the next week" the following week?
"received a household rating of 0.2" outside the US/Canada this is entirely meaningless I'm afraid!
"making it the highest episode ever broadcast..." highest episode of My Little Pony or any show?
" In part one of the episode..." actually you said it was two episodes, so perhaps "in the first episode of the pair" or something similar?
Infobox image caption needs no period.
Infobox caption: "center" do you mean the big one? Not actually center... would think about rephrasing this with "from top left, clockwise... " so there's no ambiguity.