"In the album's title, The Marshall Mathers LP is a more serious and personal album than his major-label debut," don't know what this means. "In the album's title...." why does that make it more serious and personal?
" in both clean and explicit versions." suitable links for these kinds of releases?
Don't overlink The Slim Shady LP.
" ("Stan","I'm Back",& "Marshall Mathers")" spaces after commas!!
"Eminem went on to answer his critics more frequently in some of his later works." your opinion?
"Two lines in "Marshall Mathers" parody the song "Summer Girls" by LFO." ref?
"a few other words " not encyclopaedic.
"As of July 17, 2011" it's March 2012... any chance all of these "as of" can be updated to be more relevant?
"throat splitting" what is this?
Is the Track listing table compliant with
MOS:DTT?
Samples, only one has a reference. Why?
Certifications table, put Hungary in the right place.
There's probably going to be a few months to several before I can get to working on this article, so I thought since you're interested now, I should give you a few notes.
The article is fully referenced by web sources. I know it has potential to grow into a very comprehensive contribution, but there are several printed sources that should be considered.
Here are some biographic options.
Much of the information is unsourced and citations need to be provided. Again, printed sources work well.
My talk page is open if you have questions. It's great that you're working on this article. Good luck with GA, but it's a long way. —
WP:PENGUIN·[
TALK ]21:15, 7 March 2012 (UTC)reply
"In the album's title, The Marshall Mathers LP is a more serious and personal album than his major-label debut," don't know what this means. "In the album's title...." why does that make it more serious and personal?
" in both clean and explicit versions." suitable links for these kinds of releases?
Don't overlink The Slim Shady LP.
" ("Stan","I'm Back",& "Marshall Mathers")" spaces after commas!!
"Eminem went on to answer his critics more frequently in some of his later works." your opinion?
"Two lines in "Marshall Mathers" parody the song "Summer Girls" by LFO." ref?
"a few other words " not encyclopaedic.
"As of July 17, 2011" it's March 2012... any chance all of these "as of" can be updated to be more relevant?
"throat splitting" what is this?
Is the Track listing table compliant with
MOS:DTT?
Samples, only one has a reference. Why?
Certifications table, put Hungary in the right place.
There's probably going to be a few months to several before I can get to working on this article, so I thought since you're interested now, I should give you a few notes.
The article is fully referenced by web sources. I know it has potential to grow into a very comprehensive contribution, but there are several printed sources that should be considered.
Here are some biographic options.
Much of the information is unsourced and citations need to be provided. Again, printed sources work well.
My talk page is open if you have questions. It's great that you're working on this article. Good luck with GA, but it's a long way. —
WP:PENGUIN·[
TALK ]21:15, 7 March 2012 (UTC)reply