This article was up for Featured a few months ago. I think I've responded to most of the criticism that brought it down in editing it. Please take a look and see what more it needs. Thanks guys!-- Mark 2000 07:49, 12 April 2006 (UTC) Some comments:
This article was up for Featured a few months ago. I think I've responded to most of the criticism that brought it down in editing it. Please take a look and see what more it needs. Thanks guys!-- Mark 2000 07:49, 12 April 2006 (UTC) Some comments: