This article was up for Featured a few months ago. I think I've responded to most of the criticism that brought it down in editing it. Please take a look and see what more it needs. Thanks guys!--
Mark 2000 07:49, 12 April 2006 (UTC)
Some comments:reply
The TOCleft squeezes the text between the TOC and infobox which makes it uncomfortable to read.
The TOC is lengthy, better organization could reduce the number of sections.
The section "Notable guests" is not necessary, the link can go in the "See Also" section.
The "Awards" does not need sub-headings for each year, and sections that comprise solely of lists are frowned upon.
The sub-headings in "Editions for various markets" are also not necessary.
"Other information" is trivia, integrate those points into the text.
Some of the links in the "See Also" appear in the body so those should be removed from that section.
This article was up for Featured a few months ago. I think I've responded to most of the criticism that brought it down in editing it. Please take a look and see what more it needs. Thanks guys!--
Mark 2000 07:49, 12 April 2006 (UTC)
Some comments:reply
The TOCleft squeezes the text between the TOC and infobox which makes it uncomfortable to read.
The TOC is lengthy, better organization could reduce the number of sections.
The section "Notable guests" is not necessary, the link can go in the "See Also" section.
The "Awards" does not need sub-headings for each year, and sections that comprise solely of lists are frowned upon.
The sub-headings in "Editions for various markets" are also not necessary.
"Other information" is trivia, integrate those points into the text.
Some of the links in the "See Also" appear in the body so those should be removed from that section.