I've listed this article for peer review because…I think it is reaching FA status and want to gain feedback prior to nonimation in order to gain FA listing.
They appear to be going towards kilometers. There's plenty more kilometres still in there - particularly in the {{convert}} templates. Don't know the easiest way to change them. Also how is millimetres spell in Am Eng?
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14:43, 19 January 2008 (UTC)reply
In the sports section, does The Israel Baseball League begins its inaugural season in June, with the Tel Aviv Lightning representing the city. refer to June 2008 or June 2007 and need changing to began?
Add a citation for the following sentence: "Israel's Declaration of Independence took place in Tel Aviv on May 14, 1948, and the town served as Israel's provisional capital"; otherwise everything else is covered by
Peanut4. Happy editing,
Midorihana~いいですね?22:41, 18 January 2008 (UTC)reply
Thanks! I came a cropper on dashes at my last FAC. Happily there was a world expert on dashes to hand :))) --
ROGER DAVIEStalk
Hyphens: Basically, replace hyphens used as parentheses either by spaced endashes, or unspaced em dashes. This is explained, with examples, at
WP:HYPHEN and
WP:DASH.
Mixes British (neighbourhood, centre, theatre) and American (neighborhood, centre, theatre) spellings: decide on one and stick to it.
There is an account that Sokolow came up with the Hebrew title "Tel Aviv" to allude to the destruction of the ancient Jewish state and its hoped-for restoration: aviv = "spring" to symbolize renewal, and tel to symbolize the destruction of the ancient state, following not the usual Hebrew meaning of the word "tel" but its use in archaeology, meaning "mound of accumulated ruins".[7] Very long and clunky. Two sentences? Not happy about the = sign either.
As well as having a vast array of museums for tourists to visit, and interesting quarters to explore, there are a vast array of interesting tours which have been launched in numerous languages for tourists to enjoy. Not very encyclopedic (sounds like a tour brochure).
Immediately north of Jaffa, Tel Aviv is situated on land which used to be sand dunes, and as such has relatively poor soil fertility. It is now on flat land with no notable gradients. As such, its most notable geographical feature are the bluffs above the Mediterranean coastline and the
Yarkon River's mouth. I'm sure you can express this more elegantly and concisely. Two as suches in close proximity!
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I've listed this article for peer review because…I think it is reaching FA status and want to gain feedback prior to nonimation in order to gain FA listing.
They appear to be going towards kilometers. There's plenty more kilometres still in there - particularly in the {{convert}} templates. Don't know the easiest way to change them. Also how is millimetres spell in Am Eng?
Peanut4 (
talk)
14:43, 19 January 2008 (UTC)reply
In the sports section, does The Israel Baseball League begins its inaugural season in June, with the Tel Aviv Lightning representing the city. refer to June 2008 or June 2007 and need changing to began?
Add a citation for the following sentence: "Israel's Declaration of Independence took place in Tel Aviv on May 14, 1948, and the town served as Israel's provisional capital"; otherwise everything else is covered by
Peanut4. Happy editing,
Midorihana~いいですね?22:41, 18 January 2008 (UTC)reply
Thanks! I came a cropper on dashes at my last FAC. Happily there was a world expert on dashes to hand :))) --
ROGER DAVIEStalk
Hyphens: Basically, replace hyphens used as parentheses either by spaced endashes, or unspaced em dashes. This is explained, with examples, at
WP:HYPHEN and
WP:DASH.
Mixes British (neighbourhood, centre, theatre) and American (neighborhood, centre, theatre) spellings: decide on one and stick to it.
There is an account that Sokolow came up with the Hebrew title "Tel Aviv" to allude to the destruction of the ancient Jewish state and its hoped-for restoration: aviv = "spring" to symbolize renewal, and tel to symbolize the destruction of the ancient state, following not the usual Hebrew meaning of the word "tel" but its use in archaeology, meaning "mound of accumulated ruins".[7] Very long and clunky. Two sentences? Not happy about the = sign either.
As well as having a vast array of museums for tourists to visit, and interesting quarters to explore, there are a vast array of interesting tours which have been launched in numerous languages for tourists to enjoy. Not very encyclopedic (sounds like a tour brochure).
Immediately north of Jaffa, Tel Aviv is situated on land which used to be sand dunes, and as such has relatively poor soil fertility. It is now on flat land with no notable gradients. As such, its most notable geographical feature are the bluffs above the Mediterranean coastline and the
Yarkon River's mouth. I'm sure you can express this more elegantly and concisely. Two as suches in close proximity!
A script has been used to generate a semi-
automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and
house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click
here. Thanks,
APRt03:38, 19 January 2008 (UTC)reply