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I've listed this article for peer review because I wish to push this article to GA status, and afterwards FA.
Thanks, Forbidden User ( talk) 16:58, 27 June 2014 (UTC)
Excuse me, are you up for reviewing my nomination in trade for me reviewing yours? My nomination is going to FA this week, so I need feedback fast. The article is Super Mario Bros. 3 and the page is /info/en/?search=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Super_Mario_Bros._3/archive2. Thanks for everything! URDNEXT ( talk) 01:18, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Sorry, it seems someone has been reviewing at the time I look at that page. Could you still review this page? Thanks! Forbidden User ( talk) 06:18, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot! I will be on your PR, though from 2 to 6 July I'll be on a trip.
Forbidden User (
talk) 15:04, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Alright, thanks! And I just started reviewing your oage, by the way.
URDNEXT (
talk) 15:06, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- URDNEXT, hello? By the way, other editors are welcome as well. Forbidden User ( talk) 15:15, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- Alright, thanks! And I just started reviewing your oage, by the way.
URDNEXT (
talk) 15:06, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot! I will be on your PR, though from 2 to 6 July I'll be on a trip.
Forbidden User (
talk) 15:04, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- The origins and conceptions section, and character develpment is too short. I recommend each being at least 4 paragraphs, and I'm sure there's more info to be covered there.
- Release is missing a lot of info and needs expandion.
- Reception needs a revamp. Try dedicating 2 to 3 sentences to a certain aspect of the film and how it was received by critics, like: The soundtrack was well received by critics... or, the acting was praised by critics... Then you just add a couple of supporting sentences for this.
- Tangled ever after needs expansion.
I'll be back for more soon. URDNEXT ( talk) 16:53, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- Tangled Ever After is a 6-7 min short, and so I have almost nothing to put on that. Others are being taken care of, thanks! Forbidden User ( talk) 18:13, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I wish to push this article to GA status, and afterwards FA.
Thanks, Forbidden User ( talk) 16:58, 27 June 2014 (UTC)
Excuse me, are you up for reviewing my nomination in trade for me reviewing yours? My nomination is going to FA this week, so I need feedback fast. The article is Super Mario Bros. 3 and the page is /info/en/?search=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Super_Mario_Bros._3/archive2. Thanks for everything! URDNEXT ( talk) 01:18, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Sorry, it seems someone has been reviewing at the time I look at that page. Could you still review this page? Thanks! Forbidden User ( talk) 06:18, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot! I will be on your PR, though from 2 to 6 July I'll be on a trip.
Forbidden User (
talk) 15:04, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Alright, thanks! And I just started reviewing your oage, by the way.
URDNEXT (
talk) 15:06, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- URDNEXT, hello? By the way, other editors are welcome as well. Forbidden User ( talk) 15:15, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- Alright, thanks! And I just started reviewing your oage, by the way.
URDNEXT (
talk) 15:06, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot! I will be on your PR, though from 2 to 6 July I'll be on a trip.
Forbidden User (
talk) 15:04, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- The origins and conceptions section, and character develpment is too short. I recommend each being at least 4 paragraphs, and I'm sure there's more info to be covered there.
- Release is missing a lot of info and needs expandion.
- Reception needs a revamp. Try dedicating 2 to 3 sentences to a certain aspect of the film and how it was received by critics, like: The soundtrack was well received by critics... or, the acting was praised by critics... Then you just add a couple of supporting sentences for this.
- Tangled ever after needs expansion.
I'll be back for more soon. URDNEXT ( talk) 16:53, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
- Tangled Ever After is a 6-7 min short, and so I have almost nothing to put on that. Others are being taken care of, thanks! Forbidden User ( talk) 18:13, 23 July 2014 (UTC)