This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because the lead section certainly is not good, and need to be improved. I need "others eyes" to take a look. Layout suggestions are welcome too.
Thanks, Canniba loki 03:42, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
Brianboulton comments:
This article seems to stick quite closely to the style and format of the abundant featured list discographies. As you suspected there were numerous problems in the lead, but these were mainly of a minor kind, such as comma violations, grammatical slips, redundant or repeated words, etc. I have fixed all these; you had better check it out to make sure I haven't inadvertently altered any meanings.
A few general points:
That's about all, really. I hope this has helped. Brianboulton ( talk) 17:26, 2 February 2009 (UTC)
(later) The impression I have is that the charts will only really be understood by people in the know. People not in the know may struggle to make sense of it. But perhaps its just me. Brianboulton ( talk) 16:07, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because the lead section certainly is not good, and need to be improved. I need "others eyes" to take a look. Layout suggestions are welcome too.
Thanks, Canniba loki 03:42, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
Brianboulton comments:
This article seems to stick quite closely to the style and format of the abundant featured list discographies. As you suspected there were numerous problems in the lead, but these were mainly of a minor kind, such as comma violations, grammatical slips, redundant or repeated words, etc. I have fixed all these; you had better check it out to make sure I haven't inadvertently altered any meanings.
A few general points:
That's about all, really. I hope this has helped. Brianboulton ( talk) 17:26, 2 February 2009 (UTC)
(later) The impression I have is that the charts will only really be understood by people in the know. People not in the know may struggle to make sense of it. But perhaps its just me. Brianboulton ( talk) 16:07, 5 February 2009 (UTC)