Suzuka (manga)
I have been working towards getting this article up to GA standards. Any suggestions how to make this article better would be appreciated. ( Duane543 00:07, 28 July 2007 (UTC))
Automated Peer Review
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
- I think the lead is decent, but I'm still open to suggestion to make it better. ( Duane543 18:36, 30 July 2007 (UTC))
- Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article. [?]
- Only linked full dates per linking to allow readers' date preferences. ( Duane543 14:12, 29 July 2007 (UTC))
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one. [?]
- One in the infobox.( Duane543 14:12, 29 July 2007 (UTC))
- Per Wikipedia:What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions. [?]
- Done. ( Duane543 14:12, 29 July 2007 (UTC))
- <Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 100 meter, use 100 meter, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 100 meter. [?]
- Fixed. ( Duane543 14:12, 29 July 2007 (UTC))
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 13:37, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
2nd Automated Peer Review
After those edits, this is what I get back from the Peer Review this time:
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article. [?]If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one. [?]Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 20:35, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
The Rambling Man
Right, my ideas before you go for GA.
- Returned the dates as they were before ( Duane543 20:11, 31 July 2007 (UTC))
- Don't superscript th as in 24th.
- Done ( Duane543 20:11, 31 July 2007 (UTC))
- Trim external links per WP:EL
- Removed 3 external links ( Duane543 20:11, 31 July 2007 (UTC))
- Not keen on the formatting in the Characters section, looks untidy...
- If you are talking about the space between them, it's because I used a break tag so make the images to go in the layout the way I wanted. Also I can't compress the images smaller because they don't look right. ( Duane543 20:11, 31 July 2007 (UTC))
But it's a good article, so not far from being a good article! The Rambling Man 16:46, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
Dates
Per Wikipedia:Context, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006 (or 15 January 2006). Kazu-kun 17:42, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
Suzuka (manga)
I have been working towards getting this article up to GA standards. Any suggestions how to make this article better would be appreciated. ( Duane543 00:07, 28 July 2007 (UTC))
Automated Peer Review
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]
- I think the lead is decent, but I'm still open to suggestion to make it better. ( Duane543 18:36, 30 July 2007 (UTC))
- Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article. [?]
- Only linked full dates per linking to allow readers' date preferences. ( Duane543 14:12, 29 July 2007 (UTC))
- If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one. [?]
- One in the infobox.( Duane543 14:12, 29 July 2007 (UTC))
- Per Wikipedia:What is a featured article?, Images should have concise captions. [?]
- Done. ( Duane543 14:12, 29 July 2007 (UTC))
- <Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 100 meter, use 100 meter, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 100 meter. [?]
- Fixed. ( Duane543 14:12, 29 July 2007 (UTC))
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 13:37, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
2nd Automated Peer Review
After those edits, this is what I get back from the Peer Review this time:
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. [?]Per Wikipedia:Context and Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide context for the article. [?]If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one. [?]Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. [?]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 20:35, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
The Rambling Man
Right, my ideas before you go for GA.
- Returned the dates as they were before ( Duane543 20:11, 31 July 2007 (UTC))
- Don't superscript th as in 24th.
- Done ( Duane543 20:11, 31 July 2007 (UTC))
- Trim external links per WP:EL
- Removed 3 external links ( Duane543 20:11, 31 July 2007 (UTC))
- Not keen on the formatting in the Characters section, looks untidy...
- If you are talking about the space between them, it's because I used a break tag so make the images to go in the layout the way I wanted. Also I can't compress the images smaller because they don't look right. ( Duane543 20:11, 31 July 2007 (UTC))
But it's a good article, so not far from being a good article! The Rambling Man 16:46, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
Dates
Per Wikipedia:Context, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006 (or 15 January 2006). Kazu-kun 17:42, 31 July 2007 (UTC)